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Reviews for Before and After The End

By : MidnightGuardian
  • From ANON - xEVx on July 22, 2005
    I would really hope that you continue this story. honestly speaking i don care much about the grammar. I think what really matter was the story line of the story. Hope u will continue ^-^
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  • From ANON - uwakgirl on July 22, 2005
    please don't discontinue this fic. I like your story very much. sure there are bound to be people who are going to constantly nit-pick at your grammer and writing style, but i think your doing a fine job. It takes alot of courage in my opinion to make your stories avaiable for everyone to read. I myself haven't quite gotten up the courage to do what you have done but, i do like to read a lot of fanfics and your story is quickly becoming one of my favorites. I can't wait to see what happens to harry and what kinds of adventures or danger he gets into. I'm not one to review stories since i normally just save them and read them later when i get time but i saw your note and just had to respond. You won't be able to please everyone who reads your story but i do hope you continue, it's a very intriguing fic and you shouldn't quit writing it just because of complaints about your grammer. You could always go back in the future and fix these 'supposed' mistakes if you so wish but i don't think there's anything overly wrong with it. your also right that there are other stories with worse grammer, if this is such a problem to others than they should move on to a different fic and allow others to enjoy your story. I hope this helps you i'm not very good at writing what i think done so people can understand what i'm trying to get across.
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  • From ANON - Kai on July 22, 2005
    PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!
    I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY, AND AM SERIOUSLY CONSIDERING DRAWING A PICTURE OF KITTY HARRY!!!!!
    LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Kai
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  • From ANON - morgie on July 22, 2005
    don't stop this story i like it verry mutch
    don't listen to other people just wright what you want
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  • From ANON - MadHatter on July 22, 2005
    Oh no you don't this is damn good spelling doesn't matter during steamy scenes plz finish plz.
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  • From ANON - Dezra on July 22, 2005
    You're last chapter made me weep for Harry. I can't believe you're thinking of stopping it. I think you're doing a great job. Harry is sounding really cute and I love that Hermione and Ginny stood up for him. I think it's funny that Harry chose Snape as his "mother" figure. Definitely coninue. It's a great story idea and it would be a terrible waste if you discontinued it.
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  • From ANON - niisa on July 22, 2005
    Hi

    I am sorry that some one told you that. I really like your story and hope that you can forget the obvious jealousy that accompanied that review. I thought your ideas were original and your story was great. Last I checked while grammer is appreciated it is the original idea that drives fan ficition
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  • From ANON - Dark Avalon on July 22, 2005
    Don't stop writing! Seriously, I really enjoy this story and I would be very disappointed if you stopped it. You have excellent grammar skills and the only noticeable problems with the story is minor typos which always happen when you don't have a beta reader. The last chapter was slightly confusing towards the end but that can be explained with later chapters. I adore this story, it is an interesting new twist on the 'Harry is not human' plot device! Rarely does anyone write a nonhuman!Harry and have there be social connotations that are negative! This story is lovely and while there are always better writers out there and there are always flamers, write for yourself and maybe those of us who greatly enjoy your story. Please continue, but if you can't I'm sorry and I will greatly miss seeing what happens later on.
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  • From ANON - kit21212 on July 22, 2005
    Hi abslouty loving your story, ( i just found it and am quite concerned about the authors note) I will confess that the gramma could use some improvement, but the story itself is very creative and quite original. Perhaps you should consider finding a reader so they can edit the story before you post. it is far to good a story not to finish. that makes me so mad, just getting into a good story and it is never completed. so please please please finish the story!!!

    cheers

    P.s feel free to email me i would be quite happy to be your reader.
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  • From ANON - JJ on July 22, 2005
    Hi there, please don't be discouraged, I think the story is fine. I love the father/son relationship with Snape and Harry. I admire anyone with the talent to write and the guts to put the story out there for others to read. Please continue.

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  • From ANON - Empress Yugi on July 22, 2005
    It does not matter to me how bad your grammar skills are. I still enjoy reading your work^_^ so please continue writing it^_^ PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 22, 2005
    oh please dont stop this story! I love it! Continue it please please please~
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  • From ANON - crystal on July 22, 2005
    i really like your story, i would really like it if you would finish it. Your spelling and grammar are as good or better than a lot of other authors.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on July 22, 2005
    I noticed 2 errors in my own review when I re-read it. That's what happens when you get emotional.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on July 22, 2005
    I' sorry other people have made you feel bad about your wonderful story. I would be honored to beta it for you. I already beta for Dragon34 and Petalsoft. It would take me less than and hour to do all 4 chapters. Send me an e-mail. Please.
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