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Reviews for Before and After The End

By : MidnightGuardian
  • From ANON - shelley on July 22, 2005
    Hi

    I read your anouncement. I'm not sure why you feel your story should be discontinued. I'm really enjoying it, it's really cute. I've definately seen much worse grammar and think you should keep going. I look forward to the next enstallment if you decide to continue.
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  • From ANON - Metrix on July 22, 2005
    You do not have the grammar skills of a fourteen year old. I know fourteen year olds who can't even spell kitty correct. I say continue and if some one gives you trouble about your grammar just ignore them, they're not worthy your time. We're not here to read grammar, we're here to read your story.

    Please continue your story, it was just getting great! I'll cry if you don't! (T^T)/)
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  • From ANON - silver dragon on July 22, 2005
    NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO
    PLZ DONT STOP I DONT CARE BOUT THE SPELLING OR GRAMMER
    PLZ KEEP WRITING IT IS SUCH A GOOD STORY DONT SSSSSTTTTTOOOOPPPP
    *SOBS* PLZ UPDATE


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  • From ANON - myniephoenix on July 22, 2005
    i tell you now.. if you do not finish i shall cry... and i mean literally cry... personally i don't give a damn about grammer mistakes... if someone else has a problem with it... tell them that they can be your beta and fix them... i like your story... as i'm sure you can tell by my reviews... please continue.. if for no other reason than you do not want to be the cause of my tears...

    this is your story, not theirs... please keep up the amazing work..
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  • From ANON - Echelon on July 22, 2005
    Please dont stop! Ok I'll be honest that this story wont ever be a literary masterpiece, but I really like it. It's a fresh storyline that is appealing and it's got me hooked after only a few chapters. If someone says that it's not 'good enough' then let them go jump. If you enjoy writing this story then dont let anyone stop you. Just look at the hit counter and see how many people enjoyed your story, to the one or two who may not. If you feel the need to appease them then maybe you can get a beta reader to help you with some of the major mistakes. I really want you t continue this and hope that someone making a comment doesnt ruin the fanfic experience for you.
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  • From ANON - pheonxrising on July 22, 2005
    personally I'd like it if you would continue the story. things like grammar and spelling can usually be caught by a good writing program, or even better, a trusted beta. you seem to have an excellent outline for the story and I would hate to see it abandoned for something that can easily be corrected. Good luck, and keep creating.
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  • From ANON - spaz gail on July 22, 2005
    omfg how dare you discontinue!!!!!!!
    *pouts* i wanna know what happens with dracoa and i really wanna know about the locket.......
    i shall eat your leg if you don't continue!!!

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  • From ANON - lilia on July 22, 2005
    I really love your story! Please don't say you ll stop it! (italian) Io amo davvero la tua storia! Per favpre non dire che la fermerai! Baci
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  • From ANON - daze on July 22, 2005
    you had soooo better continue this. it's origonal...as far as i've seen. as for grammer and what not...phe... please continue!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 22, 2005
    You've got to continue this!!!! It's fantastic! Please continue! I've gotta have chapter 5 and many many more!
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  • From ANON - labratt on July 22, 2005
    I hate leaving reviews, but I will in an atempt to change your mind. Spelling and grammer can only improve with practice. I am enjoying your story, and skipped sleep in order to read more. Please, use what constructive advice that you can, when you recieve reviews, and ignore the rest. I always believed that a story srould be for the authors enjoyment, sharing the story is just a bonus. I just happen to be one of the people you are sharing your story with, and I would like to see more.
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  • From ANON - Sara Lynn on July 22, 2005
    COME ON! Pwease! I hate these stories usually but I love this! He's adorable! I don't even know what the word "grammar" means! I speak English and I don't speak good! (I'm doing this on purpose dear) but I know how you feel. I went through the same thing. I wrote Yugiou on here. I'm "Merkabah" and a lot of ppl loved my stories but I got frustrated that I couldn't spell and use grammar properly. I just hope you don't give up! I would love to read more!

    Loves from Sara Lynn.
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  • From ANON - crimsonlady on July 22, 2005
    Please continue! You have a good story here! Who told you all of that rubbish about not having a good fic? I'll beat um up for you...I like your ideas and characters, please dont let your story die!
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  • From ANON - Lily on July 22, 2005
    you know what, i would like to see Snarky B. write a story and see all the errors they have! your story is awsome and Snarky B. being an asshole. so don't let one reviewer get in your way. if you still think you need help with the grammer and stuff, i'm sure there are lots of people out there that would love to help you. if you do decide to continue, i know it will make a lot of people happy. good luck in the future and never let bitches like Snarky B. let you down, becuse there is alway some out there that will like you work, becuse i know i do.
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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on July 22, 2005
    I thought this was an adorable tale and was waiting to see what would happen. I would truly hate to see it end before its time. A lot of writers start things and don't finish them, much to my frustration. Do you have a beta? That could help if you're feeling so frustrated about mistakes. The idea you came up with here is unique and one I had hoped to read to the conclusion. If you're interested in finding a beta (if you don't have one), email me. I'll be happy to discuss my writing background with you and see if I can help you. Please don't stop this tale!
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