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Reviews for Before and After The End

By : MidnightGuardian
  • From ANON - LadyX on August 24, 2005
    I'm sure you can live up to my faith..not sure about everyone elses but I dont think you can really ruin it for me. I will follow you though till the very end. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - v v on August 24, 2005
    interesting story. can't wait to find out just what Severus is hiding and what Draco is.
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  • From ANON - The doctors In on August 24, 2005
    A great story and well written and I am sure that I am not the only one who might have mentioned that you need a beta for the spelling. It really brings down the wonderfulness of your story. Thanks again for a great story.
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  • From ANON - Pepp on August 24, 2005
    *purrs in content* Kawaii! ^^ how sweet! I loved the strawberry bit6 too! ^^ I HATE Weasel right now! But I'm glad Gin and Mione stayed with him! And Pansy is a pug! Die die die Pansy! *growls at the evil scarlet woman!* ^^ I liked the mood-changing comment too!! ^^ lol
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  • From ANON - arewayume on August 24, 2005
    great story and all, though you keep using "thou" when you mean "though" and they are NOT the same thing... thou actually means something along the lines of "you" as in "holier than thou" and I really can't explain it even though I read the thing because I get boggled when the congugation charts come out so if you want to know more you can check out http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thou

    sorry about complaining but every time "thou" showed up in your story my mind would get sidetracked... I also noticed that you call 2 of Draco's friends the wrong things... though I haven't read any of the Harry Potter books, I have seen all the movies so far and have read thousands (by the way "thou" can also be an abbrieviaton for thousand or thousandth) of HP fanfics... and I looked it up in the HP lexicon (http://www.hp-lexicon.org)... so it should be Vincent Crabbe (as in Crab not Grab) and Gregory Goyle not "Vicente Goyle and Gregory Grabbe"...

    sorry again and please don't let my bitching stop you from writing more I really do enjoy this story and I'm really interested to know what's going on with Draco... though I'm kinda getting anoyed with people who keep making Harry a small girlish uke (uh... japanese uke is the submissive seme is the dominate in a relationship) when HE is supposedly the only one who can kill Voldie and HE is the one who has gone through so many trials... for Merlin's sake HE killed a basilisk by himself! Harry IS NOT A WEAKLING! Um... uh... sorry yet again I don't mind your version of Harry I just needed to get that off my chest... I'm going to go look for all the info I can find on Harry's official physical descriptions now... please write more, bye
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  • From ANON - Pepp on August 24, 2005
    Hurray! ^^ I love it! A great (but horribly sad [and mean!!! >~
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2005
    Dude there are some things u need ta cover
    1. whats up with Sev's necklace
    2. when is draco gonna clue harry in on his crush
    3. fish and strawberrries ? ew

    Seriously glad u continued the story and can't wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - Joana on August 24, 2005
    OMG... you continues *eyes glow* I was like... YAT... another chapter and now I'm going to give a party! My throat hurts from constraint laughter!
    Joy

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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on August 24, 2005
    Still loving the story, glad you continued. The tri-wizard tournament was in fourth year.
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  • From ANON - JJ on August 24, 2005
    Love AU stories and this one is good. Kitten Harry is just so adorable and I think Snape will make a wonderful father figure for him. Please continue writing and update soon.
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  • From ANON - elecktra on August 24, 2005
    That was great!! I love it!! Your doing an excellent job! update soon!
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  • From ANON - Bizzy on August 24, 2005
    The plot line for the story is good but you really need a beta reader. You tend to leave out words in your sentences so it is hard to figure out what it is that you are trying to say. Also you use the wrong words when you are trying to describe things, such as 'load' instead of 'loud', 'treat' instead of 'threat', 'where' instead of 'were'. If you fix the grammer your story would run more smoothly and be more enjoyable to read. I do like your story and hope that you continue it, taking into account the tips other reviewers and I have given you.
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  • From koolanimefreek on August 24, 2005
    WOW!!!!!! Harry's Fey and sooooooo cute! This fic is great! I just love lil uke Harry! And his cat ears and tail, cute... Can't wait for more!
    Much Love
    ~koolanimefreek
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  • From ANON - NightOwl on August 24, 2005
    I'm happy for your update, I have waited for it quite impatiently! This chapter was interesting. Now we have Draco here. So he has secret crush on Harry and Blaise, Crab and Goyle know it? Yes! Harry is cute. Do you think he can stay with Snape or will he have a privat chamber somewhere in the castle? I'm looking forward to next chapter very much.
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  • From ANON - drchrry fvr on August 24, 2005
    Wow, i'm so glad that you're continuing this story. I love it so much and I love the way that Harry is so cuuute! I can't wait for the next chapter to be up. Thanks for continuing this story again!
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