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Reviews for Before and After The End

By : MidnightGuardian
  • From ANON - fel al on August 07, 2005
    When is the next chapter coming out?
    I can't wait for Harry and Draco to meet. update soon please.
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  • From ANON - soultaker on August 07, 2005
    I really hope that you don't discontinue the fic, cause I think it's awesome!!! If you want I could help you with the spelling and grammer. I just really want you to finish the fic! Email me later!

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  • From ANON - moony 2 on August 07, 2005
    love this fic. Are you planning on completing this. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Astrael, Thw Sorrowful on August 03, 2005
    Awwwwwwwwww, come on you have to update. This stroy is ranked among my favorites. Pleeeeeaaaaaassssseeeeeeeee!!!! PLease!! PLEASE!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!! The grammer doesn't bother me!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth on July 30, 2005
    I think you are a rather good author. You do have a grammar problem, but if you found someone to proofread your story before you post it. I would be happy to do it for. It would be a pity if a few grammar errors were your only reason for quitting. Anyway, you thought right - a lot of the stories are worse than yours grammar-wise and have worse plots. People usually only review stories they hate or really like, and at a ratio of 10:1.

    Elizabeth
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  • From ANON - lightning fury strike on July 29, 2005
    grammer skills of a fourteen year old...
    ruined a perfectly good stopry with your poor skills...
    *giggle*
    darling i'm an english major
    i've beend evouring books since i was old enough to read
    trust me there's nothing wrong with your writing skill in fact it's very nice
    oh i'm sure if i went over your writing with a fine tooth comb there would be times when you didn't follow EVERY grammer rule for the simple reason that you CAN'T follow every rule they contradict each other constantly

    personally i like your style of writing it's cute, enjoyable, and flowing.

    i would love to see your story contineu it is a good story and i enjoy reading it and looking forward to the next chapter
    please do continue and don't let some snot-nose know it all tell you your no good when we all know you are
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  • From ANON - sarry on July 29, 2005
    Oh please don't stop!! I like your story! I think its cute (so far) and its not like spelling is perfect for everyone! If it was becasue of a nasty review, then ignore them!!!! Please don;t worry about spelling! ^^
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  • From ANON - Annon. on July 29, 2005
    please continue. I really like how you have written snape. And as for your grammer skills i have worse and you could always use a grammar and spell check porgram on your pc or have a friend read over it. Please do continue.
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  • From ANON - lyndzben on July 28, 2005
    ok...whom ever told you that this story was lacking.....or you grammatical skills.....should be shoot.....i'm sitting on my seat...glued to the screen...adn then that message that you are discontinueing...now that had my gut doing a flip flop....i think it's a good read...adn a riviting story line.....not ever one is talented as a writter...and when some is jeleous and doesn't understand greatness in the making, they have to tendancy to flame other people...don't think anything of flamers...think of what you think of you skills....and what a disappointment it would be for people to never even get the chance to read what you think....writting is all about "what if's"....and your "what if's" are amazing and you should continue...no matter what you do you will face prejuidce....if you don't deal with it now and do something you like and maybe love then you might back down from the most amazing thing that might happen to you....i know i'm long winded...but i have a point...please continue...if only for you and me...if you ahve to email the story to me....you should know you have touched me....and that's what's important...remember that and live your dreams....ok you're probably getting bored of me so bye....email me anytime!!..lyndsaybenoit@rogers.com
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  • From ANON - Amanda on July 28, 2005
    I read tons of fics a day and I love your fic. It takes a lot to put a story on my fav. list but your story is just so original and new I want to see where it's going. You have a great story and your grammer is not bad, at least I haven't noticed anything wrong with it =) The important aspect is the story and how its written and you do a beautiful job at that .. please continue with this story don't give it up.

    ~amanda
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  • From ANON - Demon18 on July 27, 2005
    hi, i don't think that you should discontinue the story. Don't listen to what shallow minded people have to say, i'm enjoying it and i'm pretty sure others are too. So please continue, i'd love to see what happens in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Danielle Meow on July 26, 2005
    You have to continue this story! Pretty, pretty please. It is an excellent story. If you need help, I can help. By the by, you DIDN'T ruin this story. It's yours, so you could never ruin it.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on July 26, 2005
    I love this story and I hope that you will continue it. I want to know what Severus' secret is. If you would like me to, I wouldn't mind beta reading for spelling and grammar for you. Email me if you are interested.
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  • From ANON - x on July 26, 2005
    great story! continue it!
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  • From ANON - Raihne on July 26, 2005
    I honestly enjoy the story and wish you would continue it. I have read very few stories where Snape and Harry bond as a family (Other than the one I am writing there have been four I know of). If you are truely concerned about grammar, I can Beta read the chapters for you and correct the errors before you post each part. I am fairly decent with grammar, enough so that you would not feel badly about posting, and can use spell check to cover my ineptitude in the spelling of certain words. You have not wasted our time and shame on you for thinking so little of your skills. ^_^ Your zeel as a storyteller far outweighs any errors in grammar that you make. I assure you.
    Concider my offer, and please don't leave us hanging. Continue, I implore you. Please?
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