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Reviews for Before and After The End

By : MidnightGuardian
  • From ANON - charlotte on July 26, 2005
    Hey,

    I seriously think that if you like writing your story, that you should continue writning it.
    What the hell with grammar. I, myself, am not of english mothertongue and when I write in englsish, i don't care of what the others think.
    Hope to see you update that cute story.
    See you
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  • From ANON - Azure on July 25, 2005
    im not one to criticize writin unless it really bad and believe me you are far from bad....this is good.....story is good and the writing skill is fine....dont let people discourage you please! Yes, i agree with you on that note about bad writing on this site...man sum of it is horrid....anyway i would like to see this story continue...i enjoy it...^^
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  • From ANON - Megami on July 25, 2005
    You should continue. It is a great story. I love it!!! HARRY HAS CUTE WITTLE KITTY EARS AND TAIL!!! AWWWWW (goes off and daydreams about Harry's new look)
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  • From ANON - Nova on July 25, 2005
    What is this? You can't stop now! I really don't think your grammar is *that* bad. It's lots of better than some I have tried to read! And I like your story, it's so cute and I love animal-Harrys:)

    You shouldn't quit just because some stupid flames you or something, they are to be ignored. And grammar problems are easy to fix anyway, just find a beta:)
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  • From ANON - VesselofVoices on July 24, 2005
    you better continue this story!!!! i love it, i dont care about grammer i'm horrible myself. but you got a very good plot and story here i want more of it!!!!
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  • From ANON - amy on July 24, 2005
    hey i love this story i really think you should continue it!!!!!! please let me know what you are going to do. i love the relationship that you have built between severus and harry. please please continue
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  • From ANON - Atrum-nex on July 24, 2005
    Yes. You should most definitely continue. Your story is intriguing, your format readable and any spelling mistakes you may have made do not distract from the story its self. I have read many stories where just trying to decipher the words is a headache yours is NOT one of them.
    I, for one, can not wait to read the rest of your story. Please do not let a few (or more then a few) critical reviews stop you. And if your spelling(or other written mistakes) truly embarrass you that much, then may I suggest you get a beta reader, or one of your friends(on or off line) to proofread your writings before posting them? It would take longer to update but you would still be posting. I would also like to remind you that not every one who reads stories reviews them. And that sometimes silence is the biggest complement you can receive. So please continue to write.
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  • From ANON - Nimue on July 24, 2005
    Please, please, please say you're kidding! I love this story so far. The grammatical errors are barely noticeable and do not detract from the story at all. I've read others with worse grammar and yours is fine. Please keep writing! I would be devastated otherwise.
    Sincerely,
    Nimue
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 24, 2005
    GOOD story, please continue. To lack skill in one matter (like grammar) does not give you the right to deprive others from reading a perfectly nice and well thought out facet of the potterverse ;-). Get someone to prove read what you write, if you think you need to, but do not give up.


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  • From ANON - Astranine on July 24, 2005
    I have only just read your story, and I think it's brilliant. I don't know who told you it was a waste of time, but it's not. I think you should continue writing it, and ignore anyone who tells you different. I must admit, I did notice a few grammer mistakes in your story, but so what? At least it's readable, unlike some people's!

    Anyway, now that that's out of the way - I think you're story is pretty cool! There are a lot of creature fics out there, (I should know, I love creature fics and I've read a lot of them!) and not all of them work, but they're all original in their own way and I think yours is one of the ones that stands out.

    I get really annoyed at people who just flame people's work because they don't like them. I think if you don't like something, no-one's forcing you to read it. Sorry again for venting. Hope to see more of your story soon.

    Astranine
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  • From BakuraxRyouforever on July 24, 2005
    This story is great. I absolutly love it. I think you should continue it. Kitty Harry that's so kawaii(cute)! Let me know if you decide to continue. I so want to read if you do. bai bai
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  • From ANON - Sheree on July 23, 2005
    I'm sorry someone made you feel your story wasn't any good. It's just as good as the ones on this and other sites. I read your story although I probably won't read any more. Not because it's not good but because I don't like submissive Harry stories. I like the fey/cat thing but the fey usually aren't submissive. They are usually very dominate. I much prefer dominate Harry, submissive Draco and if one of them gets pregnant I prefer pregnant Draco. Unfortunately there are not that many stories like that out there. You continue to write if you want too. If someone is complaining about your story they don't have to read it. I may peek in from time to time but like I said it's just not my cup of tea. Good luck sweetie and don't let them get you down.
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  • From ANON - Treetop on July 23, 2005
    Please do continue. I know people, exspecially about my work and my friend's, that they can be mean. If you need a beta let me know, but don't stop. You have an interesting plot and I hope you don't end it. But if you do, would you give what you have and I could continue it.

    Thanks...
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  • From dwduck on July 23, 2005
    Please keep updating. This is a REALLY GOOD story. Yeah, there are some grammar mistakes. So what? Mistakes happen. The plot and how you develop the story make up for the grammar. Plus I do believe I am kinda sorta addicted to cute little fey Harry... I just wanna hug him and squeeze him and eat him all up! Then use my sharp toys to hurt Ron and the rest of the Gryfindorks (how do you spell Harry's house name?) for hurting cute little fey Harry!
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  • From ANON - silvavnoir on July 23, 2005
    I love this fic, and honestly I will hunt you down if you don't finish it. If youre worried about your spelling and grammar, you could always get a beta reader. Alot of fanfiction authors have them.
    Don't stop the fic please.
    Silvananoir
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