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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From ANON - mayu on December 28, 2006
    i was so happy when i first read this fic in the quiet ones , and then it was only 21 chapters and i was crazy to read more and one year later i found it here, 55 chapter !!!!!!! but only one new , and my happienes die when i read that is only one more chapter and there is not going to be a wedding in the story, or an engagement. why *crying* only one more chapter

    i want to ask you the permission to translate your fic to spanish because i really love it but the end is sad , I WANT MORE after a year of wait, but well i cant do anything to change our decision can i ? because i would do it

    well if you gime the permission to do the translation to spanish (obviously i will give you all the credit ) you can send me a email to

    wiber_engel@hotmail.com

    i love your fic
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 14, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - TNgirl on October 06, 2006
    I really hope you someday finish this story!! It's wonderful and I can't tell you how many times I've read it. I would also like to see a sequel telling us how things went after their graduation and with their lives together. Maybe someday.....
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  • From ANON - Shar on July 13, 2006
    I think "The Family Jewels" must be the best Harry Potter story I have read. Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Lady K on June 21, 2006
    I just started reading your story yesterday. It's official, I'm addicted! The story thus far is wonderfully written. I so appreciate the substance of the plot and the spice of the love scenes. I'm supposed to be studying organic chemistry (ick), but I just had to review. All my best.

    K
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  • From ANON - bhj on February 01, 2006
    oih
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  • From ANON - Ladybird on January 18, 2006
    I would just like to say that I am very much enjoying the development of this particular plot bunny.

    I have, however, one criticism to make (I normally wouldn't bother, but this has been getting to me in some small, extremely petty way):

    The Italian 'Sei cosi bella'. Sorry to be a pedant, but I am a languages graduate, and the second person singular conjugation of the Italian verb Essere - to be, is spelt S.E.I. not S.I.E. for example: Tu sei cosi tanto bella, mia carissima, amatissima Hermione...etc.etc.

    Love and grammar related itchy fingers

    Ladybird
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  • From ANON - Exelon on January 12, 2006
    NO! You just can't end it now! I've been reading it all the way and were so hooked up with it and then you break the news - no more stuff! I was so used to it, god damn it! OK, I'm not gonna cry my eyes out here, but there better be a sequel! With 50 chapters atleast! PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2006
    beautiful story.
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  • From ANON - Viviane v.C. on January 02, 2006
    Hey you! I read the first 17 chapters and I LOVE IT!! It
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2005
    where's the sexual tension that makes DH fics so appealing? i guess i fail to see the appeal in this story if draco has lost all of his "evil slytherinness" and hermione is fine with him being around. it's like they've all gotten used to each other, and there's no angst over the lust/love that ensues between them. not my kind of story,
    but your writing is fine. nothing horribly shockingly wrong. i just think you're going about everything the wrong way.
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  • From ANON - lily on November 16, 2005
    ahhh, lovely story. really had me hooked throught the whole thing. I'm usually a Severus/Hermione shipper but this one was really good and surprisingly the lemons didn't make me nauseous ;) usually any other pairing does hehe. so there was something about an epilogue at the end of the last chapter??? i hope you don't leave it hanging right there, it's just very unsatisfying. author's right I know, but I do hope that you continue this with either a sequel or an epilogue. happy writing!
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  • From ANON - FranklyScarlett on November 14, 2005
    I absolutely loved it!
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  • From on November 07, 2005
    i completely loved this storee. I want to know how do you recommend your storee.
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  • From ANON - Silver Midnight on November 07, 2005
    I just love this story so far, I can never find good Blaise, Draco, and Hermione fics...Unless I'm just blind. Keep up the awesome job.
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