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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From ANON - Cac on July 23, 2005
    ~Lucius must die, Lucius must die~ Preferably at Hermoine's hand.


    And no, actually, I, a girl, like more female artists than male, though I like many of both...
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  • From ANON - angel eyes on July 23, 2005
    oooooooooo evil evil Lucius!
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  • From ANON - morwen_re on July 22, 2005
    please, please, please up date again soon! i can't wait to read the next chapter! i hate the suspense! what happened to hermionie?! i've got to know!
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  • From ANON - Nova on July 22, 2005
    I knew it! But good grief, HERMIONE! Hurry and update please!
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  • From ANON - Sugar Sprite on July 21, 2005
    HOLY SHIT!!! lucius is a freaking mother fucker!!! freaking ugly ass FREAK!! okay then, done commenting on that pig... wonderful couple of chapters!! gotta go, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2005
    OMG!! If that isn't an evil cliffie, I don't know what is! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on July 21, 2005
    Huggles for the loss of your pet. I'm very sorry to hear that.

    As for the chapter, nicely done. I was right up there zigging and zagging in the game. Will be interesting to see how the rest of the teams fare now that Slytherin have won. It worked out nicely (or wickedly - LOL) that Draco 'owns' Harry but defers it for Hermione. (for the time being) Harry would be too concerned with her welfare to care about the bet at the moment. (I do rather like the idea of Harry and Draco working together on something, they'll never be friends, but I like that there's a chance they'll finally respect eachother a little better here) I'm glad that Blaise's suspicions were dealt with quickly and that Draco easily proved he wasn't the 'Draco' that had set Blaise up. I don't like to think of them as enemies. And finally what the bloody hell has happened to Hermione and what else did Lucius take off with. Great cliffy to end on. Look forward to more. :)
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on July 21, 2005
    First off, sorry about your pet. I know that's difficult.

    I just checked into the Hermione/Draco section and noticed you had posted two more chapters! Yeah! And very exciting ones as well. Blaise must be upset about thinking Draco had ordered Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum to do the truth serem on him. Hope he believes the real Draco's story. And I definately want to know what Lucius did with Hermione so please update soon. Great cliffhanger btw.
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  • From ANON - krazykiwi on July 21, 2005
    another cliff hanger! still as good as ever, please continue shortly!
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on July 21, 2005
    Thanks for the update! Sorry about the trouble at home.

    Where is Hermione? It's kind of creepy that we have not seen her or Lucius for over an hour! Eeek, please encourage your muse! I want to know what has happened!
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  • From ANON - Beth on July 21, 2005
    Your story is fantastic! I love it! Hurry up and do the next chapter and post it! I am dying to see what happens next!
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  • From on July 21, 2005
    OH MY GAWD THOSE STUPID, STUPID ARGHHH THERE ARE NO WORDS FOR THEM. I hope everyone going to be ok. I swear this look so bad. anyway UPDATE so i can know what the hell's happening.
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on July 21, 2005
    Oh come on! darn it! i wanted harry to win! oh well...... great story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2005
    Oh! A new chapter. More more more!
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  • From ANON - <> on July 21, 2005
    URG!

    update quickly
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