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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From ANON - aCharmedOne on July 17, 2005
    Oh I think I can see Lucius intentions now, and it dosen't look to good for our favorit pair a threesome. I hope you will finish reading HBP soon. I realy like your Story. I found it just Yesterday evening and read it in one go.

    I'm eager to learn more about the other jewels.

    Bye aCharmedOne
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  • From ANON - elle6778 on July 16, 2005
    This story got me entranced for pretty much the whole day! I loved it! Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on July 15, 2005
    wow! That last chappie was hotttttt. I'm very curious to see what Lucius will do now that he resembles Draco. Your story is very sexy, interesting and well written. I can't wait to read more even though I completely understand your need to get immersed in Book Six. I'll be doing the same! LOL

    Also - that is creepy that someone could add a chapter to your story! I hope they make this website more secure. You should send a e-mail to Ayla and let her know what happened. Anyways, have fun reading Half Blood Prince! (Wonder if it will be Blaise????)
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on July 15, 2005
    I've been reading more of the story today and I have to say that it's fantastic. Your sex scenes are hot hot hot. I also love the way you are handling the reactions of the other students to the threesome. It was fun to see Harry and Draco really be able to laugh together. Well... back to reading more. Your story is holding me over until Book six comes out tomorrow!
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  • From ANON - Tasha on July 15, 2005
    yo this story is off the hook. you are an excellent writer and story teller. i cant wait til the next chapter is up and that is fucked up i wonder why would somebody go and do that to you. it your story other ppl shouldnt fuck wit it.

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  • From ANON - heather on July 15, 2005
    Awesome chapters! I havent reveiwed in a while becuase my computer wasnt working and I can't read this on my parents' computer. Great updates and I totally understand about finishing HBP before updating more, I am buying the book tomorrow and can't wait to read it!
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on July 15, 2005
    Just finished chapter 22. pant pant I'm so glad you add slash! That was sooooo hot. I loved Harry reaction to the ritual as well. You have done a wonderful job with this story. I love the bit of history you gave on the jewels as well. I'll continue reading this tomorrow, as it's now 1 am. sigh.... I'll have sweet dreams after that chappie.
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on July 15, 2005
    Now up to Chapter 20! I really love the relationship you have going between Ron and Pansy, it's very sweet. And the mystery of the jewels... hmmm I better read further
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on July 15, 2005
    I'm finally trying to catch up on my reading! Sorry I've been so lax. I love this story a lot! I'm up to Chapter 18 now. God was that a hot one! Woo! If I was Hermione, I'd die from pleasure. The way Blaise was teasing her - oh yeah. Well, I'm off to read Chapter 19 before I hit the sack and I'll be reading more tomorrow. Just wish Blaisie and Draco were in my bed! LOL
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2005
    Hot. But now I'm worried about Hermione!
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  • From ANON - Kymmy on July 14, 2005
    Well, all I can say is that I REALLY hope that you read fast!! if you are determined not to update this FAB story until you finish HBP. Besides.... surely you could get one more update done before midnight tomorrow??? ;-) Are you really going to leave us hanging here? I guess you are.... I look for updates to this story every morning before I get working, and I will continue to look forward as soon as you can get back to it. You are a gifted writer and 'plotess' (goddess with plot, get it?). Can't wait to see where you take the story from here, and how!
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  • From ANON - Alexia on July 14, 2005
    Awsome! That was another amazing Chapter! Love Blaise and Draco action lol. Normally I'm more of a snape fan but your fic is just way to good! Email me anytime and I'll whip up a banner for yea!
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on July 14, 2005
    Thanks for working so diligently on this story to get it to this point. I'm sure you're a little worried about what may happen in HBP, but I don't think that JKR will knock off one of your principals till Book 7, if ever. Blaise would probably be the only one in danger since he is not really a major canon character. I look forward to your next offering (whenever that may be). You've left me wondering if Lucius will go for the Family Jewels, which are forbidden to him, or Hermione, who is forbidden to him. Thank you, again, for the post!
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  • From on July 14, 2005
    Damn Draco's dads an ass you know that? I can only think of the things he's going to do. What did Blaise mean, why is no one touching me?
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  • From ANON - angel eyes on July 14, 2005
    great chappie. i cant wait for HBP either.
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