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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From laurenlouisa on July 09, 2005
    Hey, I have found you story and I must say I love it. The drama and feelings and the action. I like Sev's role and I love the Draco/Hermione/Blaise relationship. Lucius always makes me want to hit somthing, preferable him and I think that makes a good story. I never believed in Lucius becaoming a good guy, so this is perfect. I love the way the story has evolved and moves along it has made some truly great reading. I shall be following along from now, it is excellent. - Laurels
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  • From ANON - Nova on July 09, 2005
    Ohohhohoh! The tension is growing! Lovin it! Lovin It! Keep it up! Hehehe!
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on July 08, 2005
    I was so hoping it was Narcissa that Sev was with. :) And I think she has done what any mother would to protect their child. Now Draco realises just how much she has sacraficed to try and keep him safe. You answered so many questions with this chapter. I also like how the 4 houses are coming together as a united group - I believe that alone would affect Voldemort's plans for the future - you know -United we stand etc. I really love where this is going. Well done!!!
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  • From ANON - Vivienne Hart on July 08, 2005
    Oh my gosh, I most definitely am in love with this story!! I just can't wait for another chapter. I was wondering, would you be able to email me when you updated with a new chapter? Because that would be FANTASTIC. Thank you so much, if not for the reply, but for the cultivation of this marvelous story.

    Cheers :)
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  • From ANON - Black_Rose on July 08, 2005
    I love this plot. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Angel Eyes on July 08, 2005
    Another great chapter :).
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  • From Redneckgirl on July 08, 2005
    This fic is simply brilliant! What more can I say other than keep writting!! x
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  • From ANON - maggie36 on July 08, 2005
    I just have to say that I absolutly love your fic! Reading this is what is keeping me from going crazy waiting for Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince. I can't wait to see what Draco, Blaise, and Hermione do about Lucius breaking the oath.
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  • From demorie2003 on July 07, 2005
    I absolutely love everything about this story.
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on July 07, 2005
    You amaze me, (totally complimentary by the way) the good stuff just keeps on... er.... coming. LOL I knew I knew that name from somewhere. Very old magic indeed. Loving it. I really do wonder what Lucius is up to. I imagine the posion is for insurance purposes. He certainly doesn't have to worry about Draco betraying him if he takes the Dark Mark. Of course, since I doubt Draco is planning on doing that any time soon, either he'll be forced to or die - can't wait to see what you take us on that point. :) More please!!
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  • From ANON - DevotedFan on July 07, 2005
    At first when I started reading this story I thought it would be another pointless porn without plot, but as I read more it started developing into a great story. I'm really glad you made the decision to write this, despite what others might say. I think you write sex scenes skillfully. They aren't overdone, or too romantic. I don't know what to do with heaving bosoms, and I for one am certainly glad you decided to not add them in. I think you've kept the characters in character as much as you can, and I'm glad you made Blaise male. He is one hunk of italian man that I would love to have. Promise me you'll continue to write this even if things in the HBP don't match up in your story. It's such a great plot, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Don't let those bastards discourage you. Happy Writings.
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  • From ANON - bob on July 06, 2005
    oooooo this is getting GOOOOOOOOD!!!!
    I'm totally excited for where you are gonna take this story...this is one of my tops...if I knew anyone else that reads AFF I would tell them all about your story....but I dont....damn......*sigh*
    Oh shit! Malfoy Sr. is gonna go nuts!!! He's totally gonna get someone from Draco that he cares about.....this is one of those times where the other death eaters can get one of the golden trio for their own means, but not for Voldy's means huh? Dont you hate that?....well if your gonna do that, then I'm sure you'll make it work...your awesome like that!
    oooo....I'm not sure how you can get your kids to be quiet other than hitting them over the head with a 2X4.....but you could tire them out....like make activities for the whole day...and then when it's bed time...they are out like a light! :D
    Or you could do like my irish buddy and put a little whiskey in their milk or night drinks...*shrugs*.......I'd advise against the whiskey....try the 2X4 first :D
    UPDATE SOON!!!
    -bob
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  • From ANON - Nova on July 06, 2005
    ::ROFL:: Hermione, mother them! "Yes Dear." Oh good grief I'm going to be fit to be tied when this is over, these little moments are great! Keep it uP!
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on July 06, 2005
    this is a really interesting twist! I hope they can keep Draco safe. for whom did the "stranger" buy the potion to poison? i assume they intend to poison or otherwise hurt someone with the malignant concoction. I hope it is no our house-uniting trio! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - angel eyes on July 06, 2005
    very nice chapter, it made up for the waiting :).
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