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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From ANON - Maela on July 02, 2005
    Hmmm...interesting plot twist. I do wish the three of them would just confide in Severus though. He might be able to help them.
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  • From ANON - elektrik_storm on July 02, 2005
    gotta love someone who updates every day!!!! it is very good!
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  • From ANON - slyswn on July 02, 2005
    Ah and the brilliant story continues. so pleased you updated so soon!
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  • From ANON - elektrik_storm on July 01, 2005
    i love it! i like the slash as well! update soon and i will review! snape and narcissa... nice!
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  • From ANON - cope on July 01, 2005
    hmm, an intriguing development with Severus. i must say, well done on this. it's an incredibly original thought for a fic. Bravo. i hope to read more very soon.
    your's truly,
    cope

    ps: thank you for reviewing my stuff. i agree with you on the Charlie/Hermione thing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2005
    Lovin' this fanfic! You write so wonderfully~!
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  • From ANON - slyswn on June 30, 2005
    Aww that was sweet and now everyone is happy and giddy,lol

    rock on!
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  • From ANON - Josh Cohen on June 30, 2005
    I haven't read a lot on AFF lately -- too busy writing -- but I stopped to go through this. The plot is solid, although there are a couple of smallish holes, including Hermione's willingness to so quickly agree to being with both of them, especially after being a virgin for so long, and also either I missed it or there's a missing orgasm when she and Draco get together for the first time.

    Personally I'm not a slash fan, but when it comes up in the process of the story itself as a natural extension -- as this slash did -- I don't mind it so much.

    The sex is good as well, but the real devils are in the details. I love that Ron of all people is being the most adult about all of this.

    If I have a real criticism, it's that everything is happening extremely quickly -- it's almost as if there are some transitions (ie: "later that week" et al) that have been overlooked. Still, I'll come back for more when I see this in the updated list. I am curious to see when Act Two will begin and the rising action will start... well... rising. The story has a lot of things that I do enjoy.
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  • From ANON - surprised on June 30, 2005
    I was very glad to see the Wicked reference (if that was what it was), and am going to continue reading this great story
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  • From ANON - angel eyes on June 30, 2005
    good new chapter. i didnt expect them to work things out so easily but it makes sense and it was funny.
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  • From on June 30, 2005
    The woman Snape was with, was that Narcissa ? I love your work, you have a great imagination.
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  • From ANON - Jianne on June 30, 2005
    You are doing a fantastic job. I anxiously await more chapters each time. The sex scenes are perfect, dont let some anonymous fool tell you otherwise.
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on June 30, 2005
    Cissa, that was beautifully handled. I've always had a thought running around in my head that if Harry and Draco actually took the time to listen to eachother they might actually respect the other a little more. Not saying they ever have to be friends - but I like that they saw eachother with new eyes in this post. I imagine Ron's still going to give Harry heaps for endangering his sister as he saw it and I imagine Blaise shall be doing the same to Draco regarding Hermione. Very well done!! :) Oh and Sev, damnit, I want to know who this mysterious woman is and I only have two theories and you haven't tipped me in either direction. LOL Although that could be because I'm wrong on both counts. Can't wait for more. :)
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  • From ANON - bob on June 30, 2005
    I honestly and truly think that that chapter was your best!
    I loved the row between Harry and Draco...I thought that it would be picture perfect to see both Draco and Harry doubled over with pure unadulterd laughter...it would make me smile...and in fact, it did!
    I wonder what Hermione will think of the fight that they had....or what they will do next.....ooo this could go very badly if the boys dont play their cards right.
    I patiently await your next update! (even though it's more like impatiently)
    -bob
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on June 29, 2005
    Oh this should be good, a pissed off draco is always so much fun! Can't wait for ze update!

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