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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From ANON - Kristina Malfoy on June 27, 2005
    Wow. I love this last chapter. The replica was a wonderful idea and so amusing. I can't wait to see what Hermione will get up to in the next chapters. Please, continue!
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  • From ANON - Cittcatt on June 27, 2005
    This is absolutly faboulus story. Please write more. I love actually everything about the story. I wonder what the gift Blaise is going to give Hermione. Can't wait for more. Please write more soon.
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  • From on June 27, 2005
    Is our Draco whipped, I hope not. He would look like a wuss, a gorgeous wuss, it just wouldn't suit him at all. Well maybe when it came to Blaise, maybe. Because Blaise could dominate me anytime.
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  • From ibelindragon on June 26, 2005
    I'm enjoying the direction this is heading - so keep it up :D
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on June 26, 2005
    The different pieces of jewelry are getting interesting. I want to KNOW what Blaise has in that velvet box, so I hope your muse helps Blaise win his bet. Go Draco!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2005
    Hot hot hot. I love this fanfic!!
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  • From ANON - Jenie on June 26, 2005
    I am enjoying this story so far, although I do have a question - how are you coming up with the Italian? Maybe I'm translating wrong while I read, but it feels a bit... stilted. I've only gotten through chapter 19 so far, but must say that I'm enjoying ALL the interaction between the characters. I'm glad that it's focused on D/Hr/B, but am also enjoying the other characterizations that you are portraying. Can't wait to see Narcissa come out of the shadows. ~*wink*~

    One final note: Pizza Magheritta has cheese on it. It's ingredients are cheese, tomato, oil, and a basil leaf. I think you were referring to Pizza Marinara, which has no cheese on it at all. Just a small note.

    Onto the rest of the fic! ~*grin*~

    ~Jenie~
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  • From ANON - catsphoenix on June 26, 2005
    Oh I do hope she has a little experiment with the phallus while he is in a lesson, the possibilities *grin*

    I love what you are doing with the jewels, I can't wait to see what you come up with next *drools*

    Cat xxx
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on June 26, 2005
    LMAO - that's one heck of a vibrator there. What a delicious idea. I think I'm in love with your story telling mind. :) I wonder what Hermione has picked up on about Ginny and Harry. Can't wait to see what that's about. Draco is just going to have to accept that she will always make time for her friends although I have a feeling with a little more effort he might have just changed her mind. LOL Wonderful stuff, looking forward to more.:)
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  • From ANON - phoenix on June 26, 2005
    i'm so glad you are going to talk about harry and ginny soon. is ron ever going to find out about the threesome? are you going to tie his relationship to pansy in with the main plot? those are the only things bothering me about how it's going so far.
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  • From ANON - Celeste on June 26, 2005
    Thanks for reviewing My story, I dodn't realize this story was written by you, I've been following it for quite a bit now. I really enjoy the three-dimensional relationship, but it seems a little, ah, perfect? lol. They are going to have conflicts eventually, right?

    Thanks!

    a.C.
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  • From ANON - Tarotgoddess7 on June 26, 2005
    Of course everything's as fantastic as usual! Most of us are probably just so caught up in wanting the next chapter that we forget to review! Terribly sorry about that.
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  • From ANON - bob on June 26, 2005
    LOOK!! I reviewed....now I feel strangly uplifted.
    Ok, I totally can't remember if you told us who Snape was with (I mean in the first part of the story....If he has, could you tell me in an AN?)....and the lipstick bit was awesome...so touchy.
    And I got to hand it to you....having a shower scene with no sex in it was really new! Not entirely refreshing...but it's new. (I like the shower scenes.....do you think you could make another one with all three?....PLEASE?!?)
    UPATE SOON!!!
    -bob
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  • From ANON - seren on June 26, 2005
    I'm enjoying the story more and more with every chapter. I crack down the firewalls at work just to check for updates. Of course I wait till I get home to read them but I wait with anticipation all day to know whats going on. Molding a body part for your lover I was in a sex shop a couple of months back with a friend and we saw where you could buy your own kits to do that ( but they where for decoration only). Love the Blaise/draco slash could've been very icky but it was done quite eroticaly. Buy a big padlock and a strong cage for the kids and keep the posts coming. If you need some help I'll come make coffee and do donut runs just so I can find out first how it all ends and what magic lays within the box. But keep posting I may not review every chapter but that doesn't mean I"m not reading every chapter (5 or 6 times over nad over again) I await your next thrilling installment.
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  • From ANON - intcrimgrrl on June 26, 2005
    I really like this story - I like how you keep coming back to the jewels, and the story with Lucius and Narcissa that's being woven through the rest of it. Oh, and it's very hot! I'm always happy when I see a new chapter up.
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