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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From on June 20, 2005
    I really love your story, Draco and Blaise are just too hot. I can't to read more about Ron and Pansy
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on June 20, 2005
    That chapter was brilliant. You wrote Draco perfectly, I thought the whole chapter flowed.
    Well done, more please.
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on June 20, 2005
    I didn't mean to ask you a private question, I apologise for that. If we could predict our perfect lovers just like the movies and the story books life would certainly be less complex. I know where you are coming from. Still I do think it's a lovely gift idea just the same and she must of thought highly of you to give you such a gift. That being said, I love this chapter, it's wonderful how you are portraying Ron. Ii like when we have insights into the man he is going to become. He might be a bit slow at times but he's getting there. I think you handled Harry perfectly too, he was angry, protective and worried but rational enough to know that what the others were telling him was something he just had to deal with. Beautifully done. I don't fancy being in his shoes when Ginny has her say though. LOL Bravo!!


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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on June 19, 2005
    Slash doesn't bother me at all, and in a union of DM/HG/BZ it's hard not too, and with boys as sexy as they would be, why the hell not... Can't wait for the next chapter and possibly Harry's confrontation with Hermione.
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  • From ANON - Natalie on June 19, 2005
    *squees* That was cute ^.^ And yes, we all know JK did alot of research into stuff in hp, before writing etc.... I loev this story! So great!
    Though I had to stifle a laugh at Harrys involvement...if only he continued to follow them and witnessed that lovly smut...*snorts*
    Update soon, Luv Naty
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on June 18, 2005
    What a wonderful read. The only bonus for having to leave suddenly is to come back to such deliciously wicked chapters. I love the plot you've got going and Lucius' appearance was perfect. I loved the history of the talismans. They sounded very interesting. I didn't know such a thing existed. Where did you find out about those? I loved when the Slytherin boys turned up to take the Gryffindor girls away on the Hogsmead visit - cracked up laughing over that one and I love how you've portrayed Ron - he is maturing nicely. I like the sensitive side you are showing of Pansy too. It's great to read other stories and see the different takes on characters. As for the slash, don't apologise for writing what you want to write, everyone has the option of skipping parts they don't particularly want to read. Myself, I rather enjoyed Blaise and Draco getting together because it seems (to me) to strengthen the relationship the three of them have as long as Hermione doesn't miss out on anything those Slytherin hunks have to offer, it's all good to me. (evil, evil grin) Now if only I could find a way to insert myself in your story whereever inappropriate. LMAO Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - bob on June 18, 2005
    well that was awesome......damn I wanna see some guy on guy action in the real world.....I see guys kissing...but thats not good enough!!!.....hehe just kidding...I love the kissing :9
    I think Harry is jealous....he needs to get a life...instead of following Hermione around for whatever purpose he is following them for....yeah
    UPDATE SOON!!!
    -bob

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  • From ANON - lumifan on June 18, 2005
    Great story, im not a huge fan of slash but i think it is needed for this story.
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  • From ANON - Jacqui on June 18, 2005
    ok i love this story!
    it is great one of the best ones i have read here. i sat down and read it all in one day.
    this rocks
    Jacqui
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 16, 2005
    Freakin' hot with an amazing plot.... A+
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  • From BlackLustz01 on June 16, 2005
    Yay, I liked this chapter. I only just got the internet back up and running, as the whole network has been down for the past few days, *sighs*.

    But it's up and running now.

    I can't wait till the next chapter!
    *Luv Loz, mwa!*
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  • From ANON - Ath on June 16, 2005
    Hey =) i just have to tell you: i've started reading your story two days ago and i've found it so damn good that i just couldn't stop until it was finished. please make the next chapter soon!!!! it's an order... your writting is just so intriguing and i know that probably lots of people say this to you as a review for 'the family jewels' but your imagination knows no limits. and don't get to worried if now you're more focused on the plot, the story itself, than in writing 400 hundred pages about pure sex because that's what makes your story one of the best: it is not cheap (if you know what i mean...). now, this is a doubt that i have: being the slytherins normaly full of themselves and possessive, won't draco and blaise sometime in the future start bumping heads over hermione's?i mean... the way they like her could lead them to jelousy towards each other, and maybe fighting over her...or maybe this is just me not being able to imagine a relationship with three people actually working this good.
    Anyway, keep up with the fantastic story you're showing us until now. you've got a fan here!! =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 16, 2005
    ...interesting chapter...Update soon! i love this story

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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on June 16, 2005
    One of the best chapters yet... I really love it when an author does some research. Bravo! Definately cannnot wait for the next chapter now!
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  • From ANON - Natalie (natyslacks) on June 16, 2005
    Aww how romantic, that they want to be together always ^__^ and they have to wear each others house colours....wich will probally raise suspicion of Harry and Ron *smirk* But ohhh Hermione nearly tols Harry...if silly Ron diddnt allllways interupt, something tells me though that Harry will probers be more accepting, compared to Ron.... Ron really neads to learn to control his temper....It's the red hair, I know because I have it too *Blushes*
    Thanks for updating quickly, though another update would now be needed *winks*.
    Please update soon then,
    Luv Naty
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