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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From ANON - kazfeist on May 29, 2005
    Fine couple of chapters, again. I think your pacing is just fine. Being an old married lady, I prefer quite a lot of plot with my, ahem, "fun stuff". Your characterizations are nicely done. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Thisbe on May 29, 2005
    I adore this story! Update soon and hurry up with some Blaise, Hermione and Draco action. *nudge*
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  • From ANON - Know-It-All on May 28, 2005
    I love this fic!! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Clementina on May 28, 2005
    I really like your story it is AWESOME...please update again soon...
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  • From ANON - Lexi on May 28, 2005
    "Its always the quiet ones.." Love that little bit!

    Blaise is just wonderful. Keep this up! Sorry you don't have so many reviews, but that is the nature of the beast. I assure you it is not b/c the content of your story is bad.. its just that people are lazy, don't feel like it, etc...

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2005
    This is great! Please keep it up, I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on May 28, 2005
    I can tell you right now that I am not bored and I doubt most of the other readers are either. (seeing as I can not speak for anyone but myself) Perhaps some are too shy to review or perhaps they just prefer to read only. I must say that until I read one of Inell's stories I never gave Blaise a second thought but now OMG he sounds divine and you most certainly do him justice in your story too. You're making me think of that Slytherin sandwich again, although I could be greedy and add Snapey into the mix. LMAO. I'm very intrigued about these jewels, I'm not sure whether Lucius is warning him or trying to divert him from their significance - all I know is, I can't wait for more. I notice you thanked me for reading your 'little' story - I'm going to take that as you meant it wasn't going to be a lot of chapters because I certainly don't believe this is of a substandard quality in any way.
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  • From ANON - Yaness on May 28, 2005
    ok..since u asked for a review..
    i like the story so far....but i think it needs more drama..
    like..pansy getting jealous and revenge or something like it..
    but i like the fact that you kept it light-hearted for the most part
    keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Sweetness on May 28, 2005
    Doh! *site* and there you go, another review :-p
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  • From ANON - Sweetness on May 28, 2005
    I wouldn't worry about the number of reviews, it's perfectly normal. On this sight you can usually expect roughly 10 reviews per 1000 hits, but that's by no means always the case.

    Your story is wonderful, keep up the good work :-)
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  • From ANON - EmZ on May 28, 2005
    i like the story, its a tad slow at times but you're starting to speed things up. Maybe if you made the chapters longer?
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  • From ANON - sapphic jade on May 28, 2005
    I like. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kazfeist on May 27, 2005
    Again, a lovely couple of chapters...I am half-Italian (mother was Venetian), and I must admit I think Blaise is being extremely generous...for the Italians I know. Looking forward to the rest....:)
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  • From ANON - kazfeist on May 27, 2005
    Again, a lovely read, if I haven't told you before. SOOO nice to see Slytherins being noble, for once. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - lazy on May 27, 2005
    yay! continue please!
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