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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From robin777 on May 27, 2005
    I loved how Blaise fixed it. Of course now the confrontation with Draco because of what he left out. I've always seen Blaise as the peacemaker in this threesome and I loved how you have shown him in this chapter.
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  • From robin777 on May 27, 2005
    Well Draco was a prat. A sexy prat but a prat. Poor Blaise now has to fix it. Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on May 27, 2005
    LOL, yes well you do have to love that this IS fiction. Great plot turn though, finding a way for Blaise and Hermione to invite the "boys" to Draco's birthday party. I wonder what mischief they will get up to next. Hermione and Blaise need to get together before anything else happens with Draco, don't you agree? Of course, whether your muse agrees or not is a completely different story.
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  • From BlackLustz01 on May 27, 2005
    Good one Draco *rolls eyes*, thank Merlin for Blaise. I love reading fic
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  • From ANON - pinkyheather on May 27, 2005
    I get so giddy when I see this has been updated. I am absolutely loving it, and I can't wait till the male duo finds out she's not just with Blaise but with Draco too. And of course I can't wait to read her next meeting with Draco. And to find out about the jewels and what happens there. More soon please!
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on May 27, 2005
    That's so cool, I'm glad you're writing a story too and that I found it (evil grin). Loved the new chapter, I like the sensitivity Blaise has and yet the will of iron underneath, very nicely portrayed. And oh he's so angry with Draco - can't wait to see how that turns out. LOL There'll be punishment. ;) It will be interesting to see how Harry and Ron act at the party, not to mention Draco's reaction at seeing them there. Hope you're updating soon. :) I'm really enjoying your story.
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  • From ANON - Divine Angel on May 26, 2005
    Thank you for a delectable little update :-)

    I agree with the Marquis de Sade actually, he was an interesting man whose ideas have certainly influenced me over the years. But there is a distinct difference between erotic pain and the way first time sex is often written. Yours is certainly the most sensitive treatment I've read btw. I think it's my own experience colouring the way I read it in fanfic though, not just mine, but also knowing that so few of us had the first time we would have wanted. Your Hermione was certainly a lucky girl! I may be off the mark here, but the way I see it is that for most people, the physical discomfort paled in comparrison to the emotional aspect of the act, whether good or bad. It wasn't really a big deal for me compared to what my feelings and thoughts were, so I guess I can't really relate to it being an issue for characters (and indeed their authors). I think the problem in fiction is that if an author is going to give their character an enjoyable first time, there is an obligation to make it hurt so that it isn't totally unrealistic!

    Anyway, that's quite enough of that! Excellent story, I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on May 26, 2005
    Poor Draco, a half asleep horny young male, should be given a silence
    spell, until in receipt of A toothbrush, shower and a coffee, perhaps then
    they won't have such Foot in mouth moments. Hopefully our Italian will
    make it all better. Still love the story. Thanks.

    First time memories bloody awful, Second time not to bad, Then met my hubby Third
    time: BLOODY BRILLIANT, ADDICTED.
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  • From ANON - Dreamweaver on May 26, 2005
    I'm not sure if you are the same Narcissa Black who says such lovely things about my story but whether you are or aren't I think this story is brilliant. I love the relationship between Blaise, Hermione and Draco and that although they don't always see eye to eye they do have a more mature attitude towards eachother. This is the first story I've read where Draco didn't have a good relationship with his mother which I find rather interesting. Not to mention I wish I was Hermione in the middle of that potential Slytherin sandwich. LMAO I also loved this line "Her virginity.
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  • From ANON - Zippy on May 26, 2005
    Wicked story, excellent work.
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  • From lysa1 on May 25, 2005
    Well written.
    I like the pairing - and especially that Hermione gets both Blaise and Draco. Of course Blase is the one able to let go of what he could have had; Hermione' s first time. What a beautiful birthday present for Draco. None of the Slytherins are much in canon, but who cares, when the sex is hot and the story is good?
    I am looking forward to next chapters!
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  • From ANON - Divine Angel on May 25, 2005
    I really like your story. I can totally sympathise with all three characters and the development is well paced and engaging. I'm really impressed.

    I just have to ask, and please, this isn't meant personally or as an insult or anything, but I don't get why so many fanfic authors describe first time sex including pain and blood. I don't find that erotic at all and can't understand why so many authors do it! Are they trying to ruin the moment?! I don't read fanfic for gritty realism personally, it should be escapist! I also have to add that not many young ladies in our society these days get to sex with their hymen in tact. It is actually pretty rare, what with bike and horse riding as children, engaging in dance and gymnastics, and obviously masturbation and tampon use! If anyone can explain this weird obsession with painful first times to me I'd appreciate it.
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  • From BlackLustz01 on May 25, 2005
    Ohh, what an awesome birthday gift, lol.
    *banging her fist on the table* More, more I tell you! I want more! *gives puppy dog eyes*. *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*
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  • From ANON - kazfeist on May 24, 2005
    Lovely pacing and character development. I know this will end in a good place. Thanks for the lovely read!
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on May 24, 2005
    Well I guess Hermione's name is now gonna be updated in the book! Another great chapter! I understand about being busy so take your time with the next chapter, just not too much, lol!
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