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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From ANON - greer on May 20, 2005

    Ugh torturous pace...but I must remind myself that it is a good thing. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Kit on May 20, 2005
    This story is great so far.. I love that Hermione and Blaise are planning a party for Draco... hopefully Draco and Hermione will shake things up a bit more, or even add blaise into the mx... Im so curious about these jewels though... update soooon
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  • From ANON - maile on May 20, 2005
    oooOOohhh, im hooked in my curiosity! curse youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu >.
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  • From ANON - Lrnd on May 20, 2005
    Well a little jealousy never hurt anyone ;p
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on May 20, 2005
    You take all the liberties you want, it's your fic, and I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter... a slightly jealous Draco... delicious!
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  • From ANON - Lauren on May 19, 2005
    I love this story so far!! Can't wait for you to update!!!!!!! HOT
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  • From ANON - case on May 19, 2005
    good job please update soon

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  • From ANON - Rain on May 19, 2005
    I'm horriably curious about what in the world those jewels are. It's an interesting twist that Malfoy isn't talking to his mother, I don't think I've seen that before. It's sad that he's all alone.
    I really like Malfoy's title. As high and mighty as his family is it stands to reason that they would have some official status. Also, the misunderstanding at the end, launching Draco into a seduction
    of Hermione Granger is brilliant. Please update soon.

    Rain

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  • From ANON - TrixRStrange on May 19, 2005
    Good FF so far, I like the plot. Can't wait to see how this all develops and goes.

    Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

    Trix ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on May 19, 2005
    You have my undivided attention... great start so please update soon!!!!! I am interested in what kinda relationship that Hermione and Blaise have? hmmm....
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on May 19, 2005
    I really enjoy a D/H/B grouping. I am glad I found your story. I am looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - Lrnd on May 19, 2005
    I like the story so far!! I think the build up to the title "Family Jewels" is especially interestin ... esp with the allusions ... and the suspense
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  • From ANON - MmeFleiss on May 19, 2005
    Sorry for the double post, but part of my previous post went missing and I want to clarify in case it doesn't make sense -_-

    I like the story so far, especially the secret birthday party. You seem to be a bit confused about forms of address for people in the peerage, though. If Draco indeed has the courtesy title of Viscount (which means he'd Be Viscount {insert title name here} i.e. Viscount Ware, NOT Viscount Malfoy), when spoken to he would be called Lord {insert title name here} (to stick with the previous example, Lord Ware or more informally as Ware) the first time in conversation followed by "my lord." And when receiving formal correspondence (like the one Malfoy reads in chapter two), the salutation should've read "My Lord," instead of "Viscount Malfoy."

    His father wouldn't be called Lord Malfoy either but Lord {insert different title here}, i.e. Lord Newton or more informally as Newton, a.k.a. The Earl of Newton (but not when speaking to him directly).

    And to Anon: Cara can be interpreted as "dear" or "beloved" in Italian.


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  • From ANON - MmeFleiss on May 19, 2005
    I like the story so far, especially the secret birthday party. You seem to be a bit confused about forms of address for people in the peerage, though. If Draco indeed has the courtesy title of Viscount (which means he'd Be Viscount i.e. Viscount Ware, NOT Viscount Malfoy), when spoken to he would be called Lord (to stick with the previous example, Lord Ware or more informally as Ware) the first time in conversation followed by "my lord." And when receiving formal correspondence (like the one Malfoy reads in chapter two), the salutation should've read "My Lord," instead of "Viscount Malfoy."

    His father wouldn't be called Lord Malfoy either but Lord , i.e. Lord Newton or more informally as Newton, a.k.a. The Earl of Newton (but not when speaking to him directly).

    And to Anon: Cara can be interpreted as "dear" or "beloved" in Italian.


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  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on May 19, 2005
    A little confusing, but over all wonderful. I didn't quite understand if blaise and hermoine are a pair or if he was just playing her for the party. bah. I guess that means I must re read and see what i can see. anyways, its great, wonderfully worded and it sucks you right in.
    much love
    eddie
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