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Reviews for The Family Jewels

By : Mdunlap
  • From chickaboo on February 20, 2008
    Okay, I spent the last two days reading this story and now I can't wait for more! This is amazing. I hope you can update again soon!
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  • From ANON - equinox on February 20, 2008
    Wow, 59 chapters in one day...well, a 24 hour period. You know when you start reading a fic and you can't be pulled away, well your story is one of those! What are you plans for this fic, it seemed early on in your A/N you didn't intend for it to be this long. Not that I'm complaining :)
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  • From genna on February 20, 2008
    Good story.

    My mind normally works overtime when reading. These gaps might be explained in a future chapter, but I thought I send a shout out:

    IN THE MIDDLE, I started believing that Hermione enjoyed 2 men and they only were able to enjoy each other. How does the bond work between Draco and Blaise? They only feel the need to interact when Hermione is in the room? It seems to me if they are truly a triple, Hermione started the attraction but the Malfoy jewels would take it to the next level beyond Hermione's enjoyment. When men give us their anus, it is almost an airtight commitment except when it is just about sexual gratification. This doesn't feel like simple gratification.

    RAPE HAPPENS DIFFERENTLY FOR PEOPLE. Maybe Hermione had to push through to the end of Voldermort, but I found myself wondering how she avoided staying the shower trying to wipe away the violation or cringing when anyone tried to touch her. The sleeping is a both sign of depression or of pregnancy. In the beginning you made a point of telling us about the contraception. Now I wondering why Pansy, Ginny and Hermione don't seem to be pregnant yet.
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  • From WriterChick1990 on February 19, 2008
    awwww such a cute chapter
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  • From ANON - of elfin blood on February 19, 2008
    YOUR BACK YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more more more more more more
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  • From NessaC on February 19, 2008
    Wow... I must read more. I have a feeling the next few chapters are going to be difficult to write, what with Hermione's psychological mind not necessarily agreeing with what her heart tells her, ie that Draco is Draco and not his father. Hmm.... Looking forward to them though!

    ~Spiritxx
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on February 18, 2008
    this needs to be updatedddd pleaseeee
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  • From NessaC on February 09, 2008
    Saying this chappie was a downer is a little bit of an understatement, but I see how it's vital to the plot.
    I don't remember if I reviewed back when I was reading your story, but I honestly just reread the entire thing today to refresh my memory. I'm glad you've taken it up again, and look foward to the next chapters :)

    ~Spiritxx
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  • From Nikkilicious on January 22, 2008
    Wow this story is very in depth isn't it? I'm curious as to where it is going to go. There are so many angles and so many secrets. And will Draco bind himself to Hermione? If so, what happens to Blaise? And will she forgive him? But that, if it ever comes up, will probably be far into the future.

    Its really intriguing how you advance the relationship between Hermione and Draco and then separately between Hermione and Blaise, but you sort of hinder the relationship between Blaise and Draco. It shows that in the future there could be a lot of drama, as well as jealousy haha. :)

    Anyways, wonderful, I'm off to read more.
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  • From Nikkilicious on January 22, 2008
    This is a very interesting fic. I have been reading it for a while and it is something I've enjoyed sticking with. I have a secret love of Draco/Hermione/Blaise fics so I was quite excited to find this. You write it very well and the plot is quite interesting. I'm not one of those people who goes to read fics because of the sex so I find my favorite chapters in this tend to be the ones without sex! Lol. But the sex scenes are very nice too, and I very much understand what you mean when you say those are the hardest to write. They really are.

    As far as the plot goes it is good and for the most part you have the characters actually in character. But I did notice that the boys falling in love with Hermione and vice versa was quite rushed. But I understand that probably had to happen so that you could get on with the story. That is really my only critique. Other than that, I'm very drawn in. Nice story. :)
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  • From dolphindreamer on January 10, 2008
    I loved this story, i really wish you had finished it off, I would like to find out how Hermione is and stuff. PLEASE UPDATE! It was wonderful. Have a good day!
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  • From ANON - the pendragon on January 08, 2008
    love this story, read it all at once!!!!!!!!! update soon.
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  • From JaceDamian23 on January 06, 2008
    im loving this story so far...i still have LOTSSSSSSSSSS to read . its great





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  • From ANON - dracoblaisermine on December 27, 2007
    I started reading this fantastic story on another site only to relize that it had not been updated in over a year, I happen to find it here but it had a lot more chapters so I had to reread it(not that, that was a bad thing, as I said it is a fantastic story) now that I've found it again it is still unfinished. ARE YOU TRYING TO TORTURE US!!! Please Please Please come back and finishe this
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  • From bluezauza on December 07, 2007
    Please update soon!! Please!!
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