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Reviews for A Mermaid\'s Choice

By : Stormi
  • From ANON - lemonade on May 22, 2005
    This situation seems like a bit of rape to me. She was not approached about this scenario or given a choice about her fate. When she WAS forced into an altered state, she was left to her own devices. Now (I think, am not really sure-- you didn't go into it in detail) she seems to have a compulsion not to share her experience or feelings about it with her best friends- and she seems to have NO feelings about that. Her isolation doesn't explain why she wouldn't be in a state of panic at what's being thrown at her. Why doesn't she have any doubts or negative feelings about this? She seems to be floating around in denial that something bad has happened to her. And it IS bad. She was forced into another world with no explaination, no warning, no reason as far as she knows. I'm interested in seeing if you can address these issues because this could be a really good story.
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  • From ANON - catpower on May 22, 2005
    Weird - and utterly fascinating. I want to read more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2005
    u need 2 make chapters longer
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  • From ANON - Anna on May 22, 2005
    Love it love it love it! Please continue! This is the first hermione as a mermaid fic I've read and its a breathe of fresh air! Thanks so much and keep writing please!
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  • From ANON - RedSnake on May 21, 2005
    I like you story a lot. It is very orginal, and i can't wait for Snape to come in.
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on May 20, 2005
    Great first chapter. I can't wait to read some more. I want to see what the Mermaid Queen offers Hermione. (is it the little mermaid in reverse?)
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