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Reviews for Hermione Granger and the Secret Fire

By : chisox727
  • From ANON - Mary_P on November 17, 2005
    Please Please Please put something! I need it! I'm going to die if you dont put something
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  • From ANON - DragonsLore on November 10, 2005
    HOLY SHIT! I sit here and read this story all day and every other chapter ending I could handle you leaving it at but Noooo you have to go and stop here! Great story, I am currently trying not to throw a fit until I get my way and you update this story now.

    Like I said before, I found this story today and began reading it around noon, it is now 1:22 am and I just finished it. How could you be so mean as to leave me hanging like that? What's going to happen? This better be a happily ever after story or I'll cry!

    Anyway, as for the story... You kept having Hermione up in her room crying her eyes out, or in the library crying her eyes out, or in the house common room crying her eyes out, she had no back bone, she kept breaking down and crying. I admit that that is exactly what I would have done in her situation but she ain't me. Hermione has gumption and guts and backbone, and courage. Afterall she had continually put herself in seriously dangerous situations.

    But other that her crying a lot and a lot of suspicion towards Misten I thought the story was great, please continue and I cannot wait till you update, I will be checking daily. Hope to leave another review soon! -Your New Loyal Fan
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  • From ANON - David on November 09, 2005
    Another four chapters in a wonderful series! The sex scenes are nicely done, neither being too graphic thus taking away from the story, nor being too lacking and unbelievable. I really like how the side characters (Ron, Harry, Misten) have their own side plot lines, it makes them feel more like real people than plot devices. Knowing that their lives continue while the main plot thickens really enriches the story.
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  • From ANON - Stacy on November 06, 2005
    hey, great story, I loved how you had their relationship build up gradually, and that they weren't all jumping on each other first thing. good job.
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  • From ANON - Stacy on November 06, 2005
    hey, great story, I loved how you had their relationship build up gradually, and that they weren't all sumping on each other first thing. good job.
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  • From ANON - rangerbabe on November 06, 2005
    This is a great story. You have an amazing talent for writing! Keep it up!
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  • From BlackxBellax on November 06, 2005
    Ch 24:

    OOooh!!!!!!! Cliffhangers are the most evil and vile things in the world!! (I should know, I've written enough of them, lol). This was BRILLIANT! Please update soon, I'm on tenterhooks waiting and waiting to see what happens next...

    Though I'm curious about Misten (still... something just doesn't sit right with her...), and I'm definitely curious as to what it was McGonagall passed to Hermione... Someone please bitch slap Lucius!

    Keep up the great work!

    Bek
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  • From ANON - jess on November 05, 2005
    i really hope you keep continueing this story. Its so good and sad, and i want to know what happends next!
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  • From BlackxBellax on October 04, 2005
    Ch 20:

    Please tell me that that is not all there is... Please, Please PLEASE update soon. I was crying and laughing and screaming (often at Hermione for being a complete and utter git)... but... This is brilliant update soon please!

    Bek
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  • From ANON - AZCatFan on October 01, 2005
    Well I certainly hope there is more...I am very disturbed by this UGLY turn of events and I would be *highly* disappointed if you did not update soon and resolve this. It was going along so well and then yuck. Your story is well-written, often touching and at times laugh-out-loud funny....but also agonizingly convoluted. Let's lose the insecure woe-is-me-Herminone and get to the POINT. Thanks and keep it coming :o)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 16, 2005
    You're incredible, please, write the next chapter(s)!
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  • From ANON - lunastar on August 21, 2005
    This is turning out to be a very well written and very good story.
    I hope you can update soon.
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  • From ANON - shell on August 21, 2005
    I really like this story. I'm a little fuzzy on "the plan" as far as Harry and Ron are concerned, but I'm sure it'll be explained. I can't wait to see Draco and Hermione at least talk about their problems. Keep going, it's great.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 20, 2005
    Another great chapter, although I think that more could have been said about Draco's behavior. I love your style, and the way you're able to write the varying moods of the characters so subtly.
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  • From ANON - shelly on August 19, 2005
    oh my god! I'm on chapter 12 right now and it's just so funny I had to stop and review. "We're coming! Don't panic!" " Finite Incantum! Finite Incantum!" Seriously, I'm cracking up over here. So funny!!!!
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