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Reviews for Hermione Granger and the Secret Fire

By : chisox727
  • From AssassinElektra on August 19, 2005
    Please, please, please update soon! You've written this so well that I can't hardly believe it! And not only is it written well, but it's realistic! You play the emotions that Hermione sturggles with and the emotions that Draco tries to resist perfectly! And for an adult fan fiction, I was very surprised to see not just sex in every chapter but an actual, well thought out story! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Avanell on August 19, 2005
    I really like this story, but Ron and Harry are really getting on my nerves. They need to be taught a lesson...more than one actually. First in friendship. And then there's Draco. Sigh. Please resolve some of these problems soon!
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  • From AssassinElektra on August 19, 2005

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  • From ANON - saytheya on August 11, 2005
    please update soon!!! I read all your chapters, now I'm just waiting for more updates..don't let this become one of the unended stories on my growing list of fanfics! it's too good for that.
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on August 10, 2005
    You are bloody brilliant! The emotions and the fucking angst! I love my love stories with lots of angst. It just makes it so much better when they get together. I just can't help but be so drawn to this story for I act so much like Hermione. I secondguess everything and think I'm never worth anything. It's just so gorgeous, I really can't explain. Everytime Draco seems to mess something up, he always finds a way to talk himself out of it. That gets to me. I'm saying this as a character, not how you wrote it because I think it's so wonderful. All these characters are so round and lifelike. But especially Hermione. Misten is another great character. Kudos to everything and I wish that you continue the story.
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  • From on August 03, 2005
    Hermione just needs to pull Draco into an empty room, and talk to him, then kiss him senseless
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  • From ANON - pettrum42 on July 29, 2005
    You are one of the best authors I've read, rivaling even Red Rover (a digimon writer). Your characters are worthy of Rowling herself, I am impressed. Now, please, write more!!! I need to know what happens!
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  • From ANON - anon on July 25, 2005
    great chapter, but too short! I want to know more!!!
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  • From ANON - Norah on July 24, 2005
    Wow, did you even READ the books?

    HAHAHA. So stupid. Like I was reading chapter six of this fic, and...Draco /showed/ his dark mark in 5TH YEAR.

    and this Misten girl or whatever is just as stupid Mary-Sue.

    I hope you like writing crappy fics!
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  • From ANON - angel eyes on July 24, 2005
    update soon! i LOVED the last chapter!
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  • From ANON - anon on July 23, 2005
    This is excellent, I can't imagine anybody but Rowling writing the characters more truthfully, and completely. You are an incredibly gifted writer, and I hope you continue writing such wonderful fanfiction.
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  • From ANON - Kristal on July 20, 2005
    i love ur story!!! if u can please email me when u update i would greatly appreciate it!!!
    keep writing, im hooked! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 13, 2005
    This is an incredible story, you've really been able to capture the characters, and write very well, both in a literary sense and a technical sense.
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  • From ANON - angel eyes on July 12, 2005
    another great chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Angel Eyes on July 11, 2005
    This is such a great story!
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