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Reviews for Into The Light

By : Helbling
  • From ANON - missmaryrae on June 20, 2005
    Whoa, this is an intriguging begining. This doesn't sound like it's going to be your average love story, either. . . she's gone way-far out there. I hope you continue to write with this level of detail. I'm looking forward to updates!
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  • From ANON - steph on June 20, 2005
    oh my god that is to good. When do you plan on p dating please say soon. this is just getting great write more will bow down and sacrifice many gummy bears to your cause.
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  • From ANON - Strawberryblush on June 20, 2005
    Yes, that's what imprinting is in birds, but in Hermione's case, she has latched onto the first preson she sees acting in a recognisable manner (which is, giving her orders) because the Malfoys--ah, um, next chapter, baby! (*supresses ev-ol-ness*)

    As for the teaser - hm, interesting suggestion, but no, not his son. Not a time-travel fic either. And, technically, not Potions Master Severus Snape, for the final nail in the coffin. Good guesses though.

    Thanks for your reviews, btw, they're always great to recieve.

    ~S.b.
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  • From ANON - June on June 20, 2005
    Ch 3 - imprinting? Isn't that when a baby bird sees and bonds with the first critter when it first opens its eyes? She became a Malfoy slave first, but Severus was the first person she saw after being released - is that what you mean by imprinting? If so, I hope Sevreus understands it. Ahem....ALL the Malfoys are dead, right? She's not still slave to Narcissa or Draco or Lucius? (reader worries....) I hope those every-three-hour nightmares are gone now. Good luck on your exam!

    RE your teaser - "Severus Brutus Snape, aged 2 years, and 122 days" - is this the Potions Master Severus Snape, or his son? Mean teasing author!
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  • From ANON - June on June 19, 2005
    Ch 1-2 - PS - are all the Malfoys dead now? For sure? Thanks!
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  • From ANON - kcj on June 18, 2005
    interesting story. looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Bambu on June 16, 2005
    A very interesting turn indeed... here are the tortured and corrupted ends of the Stockholm Syndrome in not quite as charming a fashion as we saw Patty Hearst when she emerged from hiding. If you are true to these characters and your story, then Hermione has a very long way to go... and even then... it's unlikely she will ever find a real sense of normalcy. The proposed pairing of SS/HG is actually a brilliant choice, because Snape has all the requisite characteristics to help her in her struggle from either the brink or... or actual madness itself.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 25, 2005
    this is very promising. I can't wait to see what you do next.
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  • From ANON - Divine Angel on May 24, 2005
    Hmm, I'm interested to see where this goes. What's with Severus and Poppy worshipping Circe?! That bugged me a bit, I'm not really a fan of adding religion into HP fanfic. And why Circe? I don't see why wizards and witches would be keen on a goddess fond of turning men into pigs!

    Sorry, it is promising, I would just like to know where you're coming from a bit. I really like your Snape, very believable. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - June on May 24, 2005
    Ch 2 - PS - perhaps the aurors should go back to Malfoy Manor to check for othr prisoners, since they would've missed Hermione if Severus hadn't needed a rag to clean himself.
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  • From ANON - June on May 24, 2005
    Ch 1-2 - very good start. I hope you update frequently. You've written a good description of the Malfoy setting and her injuries, and I'm glad that Harry and the others didn't go off on an immature rant, demanding to see Hermione immediately. Will this story eventually be a romance for Severus and Hermione? I hope someone told her parents she's alive. I am guessing the slave bracelet is strong because she consented to it under duress, perhaps with the hope that they would spare Ron's life.
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  • From ANON - bellasol67 on May 24, 2005
    OMG, so dark and twisted...the idea that her skin grew onto the shackle was brilliant (and quite disturbing)...it's great to see Snape and Pomfrey so bothered by what they see...and yet during all of this, Snape still manages to be his weenie self with regards to Harry Potter and the other Griffindors.

    Only 2 chapters and I am totally hooked, cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good, detailed work, you've painted a great picture thus far and I look forward to your next update.


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  • From ANON - bxn110 on May 23, 2005
    Ohh More MoreMore! I like this!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2005
    You write as though its almost complete. I hope it is as I dearly wish to read it.
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  • From ANON - Sevenew on May 22, 2005
    This story seems like it's going to be very interesting. Although I haven't read the rest of the story yet (obviously) I think that the little story at the begining helped set up your version of both Snape's mentality and his motivation. I like the writing style and really hope you continue soon!
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