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Reviews for Into The Light

By : Helbling
  • From ANON - Elizabeth on November 02, 2005
    This is really good; I like a long. slow build-up where 'ships are concerned. Too often, you get writers who jump right into the snogging/shagging...whereas this story promises to be wonderfully realized.
    Kudos to you...and I can't wait for the next update!
    Elizabeth A. Kowols

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  • From Bambu on November 02, 2005
    Oooh, he used the 'C' word. Boy was Snape infuriated, and rightly so. Excellent chapter, as always. My favorite part was the brief interaction between Minerva and Snape: "But, that's illegal!" "That's Umbridge" "Right, fair point..." Just fabulous! I think I cheered for Minerva.
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  • From ANON - Aurora on November 02, 2005
    You updated, YAY!!!! I loved this chapter, especially the Umbridge Snape scenes. Can't wait to read more, keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - Alauralen on November 02, 2005
    OMG I can wait to see what trouble Severus makes for Umbridge!! That bitch deserves it!! Very well written chapter. I like how you have Hermione is progressing and I feel so bad for her parents! Please update soon, you are doing a great job!

    Alauralen
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  • From ANON - June W on November 02, 2005
    Ch 11 - thank you for updating!!!! Great chapter - I'm so glad her parents finally got the chance to see her, and how clever her mother was to avoid Umbridge like that. Wonderful use of the Weasley Twins to let them loose on Umbridge. And I enjoyed seeing Professor McGonagall "bend" the rules with the flying carpet. Still, that's a lot of effort everyone is putting in to avoid Umbridge, so I hope Severus is able to get rid of that awful witch once and for all with this last bit. I did wonder why Hermione is so afraid of Umbridge - was Umbridge a visitor to the Malfoy Manor, or a closet Death Eater? I think it might be too soon to talk about Ron's death with her, if she is still afraid of things, but I do like the way Severus is still willing to cuddle up with her.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on November 02, 2005
    Awwww! What a sweet ending! AND GO GRANGERS!!! Lol! But what a bitch Umbridge is! I liked how Severus kicked her out... even though it had upset Hermione! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2005
    nonononono where is the next chapter, god your story is so real, i cried when i was reading that part where Snape was talking to Harry about Hagrid. omg please write more, i need more. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!

    ~Deathraven
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  • From ANON - Harley on October 25, 2005
    I'm very intrigued by this story. It has started out very well. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Erin on October 23, 2005
    It's good to see Hermione recognizing Ron, even if it was only the way that she didn't want to believe that he was dead like they were telling her.
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  • From ANON - Katie K on October 22, 2005
    Oh wow... this story is still absolutely amazing! Poor Hermione! I'm so glad she trusts Severus now though... at least. Please update soon! I'm addicted to this story *blush*
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 21, 2005
    Ahhhh, the plot thickens...I can't figure out what happened to Ron. Is he still alive? I know you are busy and need to do your work but I'm looking forward to the next installment and hope we don't have to wait too long for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Nightmare on October 21, 2005
    I don't know if you thought of it, but I felt that the reason Hermione fixated on Severus was not because he was the first authoritative voice she heard, but because he used his fading dark mark to unlock her shackle. Some enchantment in the cursed thing tells her that he is her master, because he controlled it.

    Worth a thought?
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  • From ANON - Bambu on October 20, 2005
    As always, your newest chapter is hopeful and heartbreaking all in one. I absolutely loved Minerva in this. She's staunchly loyal and fierce and all that a Gryffindor and a mature witch should be. I know that this is your own story, but there is a small part of me that would dearly love to see Minerva be the one to send Umbridge 'to that chilly North Sea isle for all time.'

    Good luck with your semester and your classes, and I'll look for your next chapter... The holidays aren't too terribly far away.
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  • From ANON - soniab on October 20, 2005
    Hey,
    Another great chapter, I really love this story it's great... What else can I say, except update A.S.A.P.
    Cheers, Sonia
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  • From ANON - angel on October 20, 2005
    wow please update soon would love to read what till happen next and in tillthen keep up the awesoem work and later fro now

    angel
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