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  • From ANON - Alexis on October 17, 2005
    Great story! Write more, please!
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  • From ANON - Karen on October 12, 2005
    Excellent development of Hermione's leaving the thought processes of captivity behind. Looking forward to more.

    Thanks
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2005
    Wow! This is brilliant. I can't wait for your next update. Your Snape is very believable and I love how Hermione's recovery isn't being rushed. The changing relationship between Harry and Snape is also interesting, and the whole Umbridge factor adds another element of conflict to the story. It's really well written, good job, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - June on October 02, 2005
    This isn't a review - I just want to be sure you see the top of this page. The site's admins just put up a notice:

    NOTICE: Stories must contain Disclaimers (excluding Original Stories)! Any stories remaining without a Disclaimer by October 31, 2005 WILL BE DELETED! It is a big deal. We must protect the Site.

    (It's just a legal thing so that they don't get sued by movie studios, book publishers, etc.) 'Into the Light' doesn't have a disclaimer, so please-please-please add one so that it won't get deleted, or I won't be able to read anymore! Thank you. :=)
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 01, 2005

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  • From ANON - kishkitten36 on September 27, 2005
    I've been reading this story since you posted the first chapter. I only have one question that niggles at my brain, LOL. The metal band/shackle that was imbedded in her skin when they first rescued her, they could not remove because it had to be removed by her owner. Is it still there or did they figure out how to remove it? Did it pop off once she identified Snape as her new master? I just don't remember it being mentioned again after that early chapter...
    Great story, dark and sad, but really interesting IMO.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 26, 2005
    Oh man you have to update soon! I have laughed so much through this, and it is brilliant - please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Darque Hart on September 25, 2005
    Just a note to let you know that there are people reading your story and enjoying it. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - becca on September 24, 2005
    I've just read this for the first time, and have to say, excellent job. I really like the job you're doing with Snape, and all of them for that matter. The bit with Umbridge is highly amusing. Please continue soon. I would like to see Hermione rediscover herself.
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  • From ANON - Rose Evans on September 24, 2005
    It's a great story.Sorry I cant write more. I'm tired. Will you let me know when you are going to update? Rose
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  • From ANON - Miranda White on September 24, 2005
    Pleasemdo us all a favor and finish this story!
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  • From ANON - jane on September 20, 2005
    At first I was unsure where this story was going but I like it more and more do keep going I am really enjoying it now. The interaction between Harry and Severus is fun, bringing in Umbridge adds sparks. Good fun
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  • From ANON - Jo on September 19, 2005
    A well written, thought provocking story....
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  • From ANON - Bambu on September 19, 2005
    I'm delighted to see that your holiday revitalized you, and very happy to read this most recent chapter. I've always thought that Umbridge was as evil as Voldemort, more so in some ways. She wasn't a vigilante, and had the weight of governmental approval behind her sadism... a very chilling thought in and of itself.

    Your Harry is terrific... the fact that he can be cold to Umbridge and his fear/worry for Hermione are terribly endearing. That he and Severus are working together -- albeit awkwardly -- is written with all the awkwardness that their shared history has. And I laughed aloud about the house-elf. Especially the part about it making him feel better to have kicked something... and telling it to heal itself. That was just brilliant.
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  • From ANON - soniab on September 18, 2005
    Hmmm interesting ch 9... Not at all dark like the rest of your writing but I suppose you have to add some little bits of plot here and there.
    I am fascinated by your writing and throughly enjoy your story so far.
    Have a very happy birthday (I can remember my 21st well, I was living in the US at that stage too) and I hope Uni goes well for you.
    Don't leave us hanging for to long for the next chapter. I know this is quite a lot to ask with real life happening and all that.
    I liked the fact that Severus kicked the house elf down the stairs (ha ha ha) and that it landed on Harrys head, LOL!!! I still like your dark writings better but I suppose as you progress in your story that it will be getting lighter and lighter.
    Oh well I feel that I have rambbled on enough and taken more time than you have... Keep up the good work, I look forward to ch 10!!!
    Cheers, Sonia
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