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Reviews for Into The Light

By : Helbling
  • From ANON - firewall on August 09, 2005
    I'm enjoying the pace of your story. Poor Severus, I can only imagine his asperity at having someone so dependent upon him. Hermione's reassurtion of character is coming along slowly but nicely. Thank you for sharing with us...update soon please.
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  • From lupinsveela on August 09, 2005
    this story is so good. i like the plot and how things are coming together. feel free to email me anytime, if you need any ideas. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - luvssnape on August 09, 2005
    I love this story. Very interesting. I like the way you have Severus retraining her to be an individual and not someone's servant. I am excited for an update.
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  • From ANON - June W on August 09, 2005
    Ch 7 - thanks for the new chapter! It makes sense that she feels safer on the floor. I wa afraid he'd have to put her on a floormat to sleep, but the campbed sounds great. I wonder if he can teach her to use a Pensieve so he can see who the Death Eaters were who tortured her. Was Macnair the one who killed small animals? If she can eat Yorkshire pudding, perhaps eggs could be on the diet next. Umm, you're not still going to bring Umbridge in, are you? Eeks! Hermione needs something else familiar, like helping him put away potions ingredients - that could remind her of her past. Looking forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - BlackTiger on August 06, 2005
    Not kidding when you said this was dark. It's a riveting read though and I'm particularly enjoying your characterisation of Snape. Hope you write more soon.
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  • From ANON - pH on August 06, 2005
    Lovely, well-written, and captivating. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Aleerah on August 05, 2005
    NOOOOO!!!! Why did it have to end there? When are you going to add more?
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  • From ANON - Aylse on July 30, 2005
    Ummm, did anyone else just burst out laughing when they heard this line....

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  • From ANON - Katie K on July 29, 2005
    Damn cliffhanger grrr! That whole part with Severus and the bras cracked me up by the way! Loved it. :-) Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Bambu on July 28, 2005
    I'm delighted to see that you're carrying on in the face of HBP, and that you've so very realistically crafted this piece, even to the physical alterations due to lack of hormone production (caused by starvation and implied hysterectomy) including the loss of her breasts and menses. This is nicely, nicely done.
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  • From ANON - missmaryrae on July 28, 2005
    Haha, Snape with bras.
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  • From ANON - June on July 28, 2005
    Ch 6 - well, I'm guessing that scream is Hermione waking up in a strange place and not knowing where she is, panicking because Severus isn't there, and afraid she'll be punished for being on the furniture. Poor Severus with the bra-shopping - he'll be going through a lot of sizes! That's so sad about Severus not getting the bed he wanted - I hope he gets it by the end of this story. Thanks for the new chapter!!
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  • From ANON - dryade on July 21, 2005
    Great work! Dark and angsty!
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  • From ANON - Aleerah on July 20, 2005
    Love the story so far. When are you going t oupdate? Please do it soon.
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  • From ANON - gaia on July 19, 2005
    Fantastic. It's nice to see dark done well. I look forward to updates.
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