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Reviews for Just One Step Back

By : lonewerewolf
  • From ANON - antipyro on May 28, 2005
    Great, but short chapters!

    Very easy to read, really fast, so just keep them coming.....!!!!!

    Thanks!
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  • From ANON - momoko on May 27, 2005
    I like this story verry much,bye
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 26, 2005
    Thanks for the explanation.

    Keep writing and post soon.
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  • From ANON - Missi on May 25, 2005
    More please? And Thank You?
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  • From ANON - Hambares on May 24, 2005
    Thank you so much for the explaination! It really helps. Now on with the fic.......please...begs....
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  • From ANON - sakya on May 24, 2005
    Too short, way too short.

    Can't you have mercy on us and write longer chapters?
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  • From ANON - Hp/SSlover on May 24, 2005
    I think you should ignore your bad reviews! You have a lot of talent and you shouldn't feel dejected over some of the comments made, yes your grammer isn't fantastic but maybe you just need a BETA, or to check your work before posting! I like this story so far, though I do have some questions about the plot, but I'm sure it will be incorporated into the coming chapters! Please post again soon, this story has to much potential just to be left where it is!
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  • From ANON - Hambares on May 23, 2005
    Why is Harry back in time?
    Why does Snape not seem confused as to why he suddenly has a mate and that said mate is pregnant?
    Short chapters but interesting story. Just need some background information for your poor struggling readers! Thanx!
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  • From ANON - icestar on May 23, 2005
    some of these are a bit short, but its a cool outline. hope to see more ^_^
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  • From ANON - amethyst on May 23, 2005
    why did harry go back in time and how? why is sev his mate?
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2005
    uh?
    why is he in the past?
    we do need an expliantion
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 22, 2005
    This story hasn't established much of a plot, not that one is required, but it jumps around very suddenly. If you could give us a little more explanations of what's going on and why, I'm sure this storyline can be made into a great fic. The title suggests that Harry has gone back to a previous timeline, why, I can only imagine. Does he want his children to be born then? or is something else due to be set in motion?????

    You have a great talent for writing, please don't dismiss it by rushing through your stories. I know that everyone wants updates 'yesterday' because the stories here are really good. I don't want to disuade you from writing, but please, a little more time and care will make us just as hungry to read them and review with much applause and confections for you and your muse(s).

    You've managed to portray the characters, now just develop the story line. If I've jumped the gun on you, I'm sorry. I'm usually very patient and understanding. I also know that you've updated 5 of your fic this day alone. WOW! you should rest and enjoy the experience, like we do.

    Thanks again for your stories, I'll keep reading just to see what happens!
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  • From foxracerchick129 on May 22, 2005
    Woah, I'm a little confused.
    How did Harry get to his parents time, and why dont they realize how much he looks like both of them?
    How did Severus know Harry already, when everyone else didnt?
    Does Dumbledore know that Harry is ... well Harry?

    And theres a lot of grammar problems.

    Other than the unanswered questions and the grammar, I really like it so far. Cant wait for the next update

    - Jessica
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  • From ANON - Jimmy on May 22, 2005
    Wtf? Im so confused.
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