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Reviews for Just One Step Back

By : lonewerewolf
  • From Lillyrose on November 20, 2016

    Awww but your story is so good. 


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  • From ANON - serinianfire on July 11, 2015
    This story is great so far! I hope you keep writing it! I look forward to the rest!!
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  • From Strawberrychan1 on March 27, 2011
    awesome lov the story could be detailed and edited more but it is awesome none the less anyway hope your beta is back soon...plzs update soon
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  • From smorris82 on January 28, 2011
    Beautiful story.
    Keep up the great work.
    Please update soon.

    SM
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  • From MinervraMcGonagall on March 24, 2009
    Aren't you gonna finish the last chapter and have an sequel as well?
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  • From lonlyheart on September 11, 2007
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - Zafaran on January 02, 2007
    This is a terrible place to leave this hanging. Is there any chance of your posting more chapters anytime soon? You've got an interesting beginning (though I wish your chapters were longer), and I'm interested in seeing where you go with the story from here. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
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  • From ANON - lela951 on November 27, 2006
    Im loving the fanfic!!! i was wondering if you had any plans in continuing this fic. PLEASE SAY YOU ARE!!!!! I cant stand the suspence...
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  • From ANON - HUNTRESSS on January 10, 2006
    Come on Wolfie... please update your storie.... I WANT MORE!!!!
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  • From ANON - phoebuscat on December 20, 2005
    Did you ever think of making a longer chapter rather than throwing out three or four sentences in each? This is bad style and impossible to read!
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  • From ANON - Esther on December 19, 2005
    god! these chapters are too short!!! please make them bigger. it is better to read a good story that has big chapters than good stories with short chapters!!

    c ya!
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  • From ANON - Huntresss on December 19, 2005
    come on the wait is killing me UPDATE... PREETY PLEASE sugar plums...and pumpkin pie on top with whip cream...

    (hmm lots of evil thoughts about that whip cream maybe I'll keep that for myself...nahhh I WANT THE UPDATE)
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  • From ANON - hera on October 02, 2005
    wow. i wonder. could it be future pettigrew. nah. not. ingenious though. one minute you think that young peters bad then you find out he aint that bad. a brilliant and very interesting read. please update this fic soon. i want, i hope, i'm begging you,to show harry back with sev. either sev. i don tmind. just a sev. you are fab. GO YOU!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - deb on June 29, 2005
    ya know your story is not how i wanted it to be i wanted them to be together for 2 years before he is sent back sev knew he was from the future he goes back snape wants nothing to do with him but its only becuase he doesnt think harry wants him thats untill harry finds out hes pregnant they are having a row maby when he gets back three weeks back maby and harry shouts at him telling him he would always love him no matter what that he was his first love and only. that he didint want to go with anyone else coz he knew snape didint want him for the boy who lived he was starting to beleve him when harry falls they go to the hospital wing and told that harry is pregnant with three children snape faints knowing they are his hehe they get together !! after that whooo ofourse voldi is dead it was him who sent him back he ends up in the same spot he knew he was pregnant and would protect his child at all costs kills voldi without a second thought he takes sevs dark mark away kisses him and falls unconsious when he falls unconsious he forgets certain things like being preggie he was told again then sev in another few weeks gets told hes preggie and ends up with either triplets or twins if you do this please use my names

    damon sebastian potter snape
    severus james potter snape
    alexander harry potter snape
    lilian sabrina potter snape
    serena heather potter snape
    emls dickon potter snape
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 24, 2005
    While this story has the makings of a good one, you need to work on it. You should write a bit about what happened to make Harry come to the past instead of just saying it as an author to your readers. Also, make the chapters longer instead of just having one paragraph as a chapter.

    I hope to read more.
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