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Reviews for Seventh Floor Corridor

By : PrincessLizzie
  • From ANON - Nikki on December 19, 2006
    I LIKED YOUR REASONING! It makes sense! It's harry and draco! obviously it takes them hours to have sex cause well..WHO WOULDNT WANT TO TAKE HOURS TO HAVE SEX WITH THEM!?!?!
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  • From ANON - Alaina on November 10, 2005
    Ok I've read this before but I had to read it again. I love it. It's so hot. Brilliant. Love you're writing
    love lots
    Alaina
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  • From ANON - Xtreme17nc13 on October 08, 2005
    Hot-ness! I'm glad you wrote a bit to hold us all over on 'One Weeks Detention'. I am so waiting for a smut-filled update on that. This was great though. The only part that confused me was that they were in a corridor but there was a desk? Maybe they went into a room and I missed that line. I don't really care though, because this was too hot to be all technical. Great job. Toodlez! --Ashlee
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  • From ANON - FA on June 23, 2005
    *falls over laughing* Darling...you need to go back and re-read that, because it don't make too much sense. There are a few typos, of course...but you start out by saying it's "long after curfew" and then end it with people in the hallways on their way to class. I don't think that works, lol.

    Hugs and Love,

    FA
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 24, 2005
    I'm confused. At the beginning you wrote it was long past curfew. By the end it was students going to class? Did it take that long?
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 24, 2005
    Oh my! All of this during the day? Where they could have been found out?
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  • From zentiis on May 24, 2005
    *fans herself*....hot!
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  • From ANON - Shuuichi Shindou-Uesugi on May 23, 2005
    do you even have a beta if not con i be your beta.





































































































































































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  • From ANON - Xtreme17nc13 on May 23, 2005
    Yes, me again! Don't ya love it! Uhm, I'm not that good at describing orgasms and such but how about... Draco slammed into Harry's prostate repeatedly. Harry erupted with Draco's name on his lips and Draco felt Harry's tight cavern tighten around him.
    The tight heat was too much for Draco and with a final thrust he came inside of his lover's lithe body....yada yada. I hope you like it because I have many questions about One Weeks Detentions!! P.S. Thanks for the hot dirty sex!! Mmm, smut....Lol!
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  • From ANON - anon on May 23, 2005
    not bad. good descriptions and great for a pointless smut fic. Just one thing...in the beginning you said that it was past curfew, but at the end, when Draco left, all the sudden he has to go to class with other students. That was one looooooooong fuck if that be the case. Otherwise, just what I needed for my day.
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  • From ANON - Tashasaphi (forgot to login- doh) on May 23, 2005
    the orgasm waaas a bit short
    You really have to slow it down. Screaming is always good, if not, muffled screaming, biting down on eachothers shoulder so no one hears. Arching backs, tightening muscles, final, desperate twitching/thrusting, all that stuff- spots inf ront of eyes, vision going blank, throwing heads back.

    generally, post orgasm, you have to leave them a moment to pant/relax, chill out/ fall against eachother. And pulling out should probably elicit some reaction from the bottom guy.

    does that help?

    Other than that, it's pretty fun ^__^

    DRACO MUST BE BOTTOM.

    The end
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  • From ANON - makun on May 23, 2005
    wow this was great! you sure had my attention the whole time and i had great music playing lol thanks for an excellent read!
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