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  • From ANON - cottoncandy on May 31, 2005
    POOR DRACO AND HARRY! PANSY IS SUCH A BITCH AND CRAB NEEDS TO GET SLAPPED IN THE HEAD!

    UPDATE SOON! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 31, 2005
    POOR DRACO AND HARRY! PANSY IS SUCH A BITCH AND CRAB NEEDS TO GET SLAPPED IN THE HEAD!

    UPDATE SOON! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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  • From ANON - TONOLostGirl on May 31, 2005
    Great story! I love AU but this is one of the best I've read... It's realistic! Um, idea wise you could have Draco quit the team and Harry be all upset because Draco quit, thinking it's his fault then have Draco explain in a very loving situation that he didn't quit because he couldn't take both Harry and football, but because Harry made him realize his priorities and Harry just happened to be at the top and then have Draco explain to Harry how much he loves him and how he can't live without him, leading to a sex scene. That's my romantic idea. My action idea is to have Harry join the team to boost Draco's confidence and keep him playing. The whole school seems to be ridiculing them now especially seeing as no one knows Harry's potential except Draco and James. Then James can make a lovely guest appearance at one of Harry's games and something can happen between Snape and James and Harry and Draco are now the stars fo the field after an amazing jaw-dropping game. If you want you could even take that and go into a game where Harry gets the shit beat out of him because the very vicious opposing team realizes he isn't as tuff as he seems. Harry gets rused to the hospital and Draco is traumatized, thinking it's his fault cause Harry joined the team for him and this will put their love to a huge test as Harry's on the edge of sl;ipping into a comma. You could probably work Draco's dad into it somewhere as well. Well, anyways, those are my ideas, feel free to use them. Keep up the good work.
    -TONOLostGirl
    PS- where is Lily? and why did Harry move in the first place?
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  • From ANON - ura on May 31, 2005
    It seems that Draco was too cruel to his dying father. I guess he must have had a good reason to behave this way. How did Lucius drive Draco to suicide attempts you mentioned earlier?
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  • From on May 31, 2005
    Great update! I hope you update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - R on May 31, 2005
    That was a great chapter! I thought it was so cute when Harry answered the door and jumped at Draco... very sweet. Well I for one, would like to know where Lily and Narcissa are (or what happened to them) so if you want to put that into your story line that would be cool. Keep up the great work and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - sak on May 31, 2005
    Are there any mothers in this story? No mention of Harry's mom or Draco's mom or anyone's mother. Consider explaining why there are no mothers.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 31, 2005
    Can't wait for chapter 11! Harry is too wonderful!
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  • From ANON - cottoncandy on May 31, 2005
    AW! They are so sweet together! Update soon
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  • From ANON - Muthru on May 31, 2005
    I like the whole story very much even though I don't understand anything about American football, not that the European makes any sense;) and I live here(Eu).
    I donno if I have missed it or what, but where is Harry's mom(supposed Lily)? More chapters please:) Ci Muthru
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 30, 2005
    Oh things are going to go bad! Real bad! And to have to go to school with all that. Oh no! What does Lucius say to Draco? Why would he consider quitting football? Need chapter 10!
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  • From ANON - elecktra on May 30, 2005
    That was great! I loved it!! I soo can
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  • From ANON - Brittany on May 30, 2005
    omg that was great!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - swampthang on May 30, 2005
    Poor Draco! He's got so much to deal with and now he has to figure out what he's going to tell everyone about the dance he and Harry shared! This is really good! I always seem to enjoy AU stories but this one is one of the best! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - katina on May 30, 2005
    Oh GOD I don't even want to know whats going to happen with the dance situation.....oh wait..yeah I do..so who does Draco live with?? well I can't wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON!!
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