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Reviews for After The War

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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on September 06, 2005
    Bless!!!!!
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  • From ANON - snapescat on September 06, 2005
    ARGHHHHHHHHHHH. How can you stop there! A VERY evil cliffie. Please wake them up now, and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Moi on September 06, 2005
    I thought you'd given up. Bring out another chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Moi on September 06, 2005
    The author of her only book should be Borden Spotless. Say it out loud.
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  • From ANON - The Heavenly on July 17, 2005
    Bravo! This is a great HG/SS fic! Please continue, I so want to see more. *laughs* The last part where Severus walked in on Hermione was a lot more funny than it was supposed to be for some reason... Please update soon - it would be a waste if you didn't.
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on June 25, 2005
    HaHaHaHHaHa! Oh this was great! I knew one of them had to stumble across the other partially nude sometime! LOL! Can't wait for more! Toodles!
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on June 21, 2005
    The think this story is really interesting. Please update asap.
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  • From ANON - TaintedAnjel on May 27, 2005
    Interesting....interesting....
    Looking foward to seeing what happens here!!
    Good work hunny!

    Tainted Angelxxx
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on May 26, 2005
    Great work. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - June W on May 25, 2005
    Ch 1-2 - great start! I just hope the two of them don't stagnate too long, puttering but not doing anything challenging for their minds. Hasn't he figured out that she can be a useful potions assistant? Or they can both work for those shops in Diagon Alley - she can be the "public" face and they can both stay home and make potions in their home lab. They need money to buy groceries and stuff. Might as well make potions for sale! Thanks for posting. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - mysticsong on May 25, 2005
    Quite the interesting plot you have going here; I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on May 25, 2005
    AGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH DJEEEEZ! Did you HAVE to stop there??!!!! *pants*

    Ok.... if you don't continue writing this story I will.... I wlll..... I will poison you with one of Snape's personal potions! HA! Let that be a motivation to you to keep writing this fic! ARGH! I wanna know what happens! *growl* I just love Snape! I love him, I love him, I love him! No matter what..... I LOVE HIM! *swoons* Please keep writing! I'm excited to see where this goes! Toodles!
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  • From ANON - SteffieSnape on May 25, 2005
    Awwwwwww.... that's so sad! (snif snif) I hope things work out! Ahhh..... must read on!

    (It migh thelp the readers if you broke up paragraphs into smaller ones. Like dialogue should begin its own paragraph. Just a helpful hint ^_^ )

    Don't stop writing! Toodles!
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  • From ANON - JJ on May 25, 2005
    You've got the beginnings of a thoughful story here. A lot of internal diologue so the characters can explain how they are feeling and how their feelings are changing. You've also stuck pretty close to canon, but of course, if you are going to make this a romance you will have to veer off and make Snape more human and his thoughts show that he is more than the snarky professor. He seems awfully tired and old so far. Have you set this up to show that Snape if floundering in a new world so different from his past life? That in fact he didn't really have a life before and now he has to make one? I hope he perks up as their relationship progresses. A nice start. Bravo.
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