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By : harriet
  • From foxracerchick129 on May 28, 2005
    Ooh three chapters at once, I love it! lol. So is Snapey in that creepy old house behind the hedges or something? I wonder.... i dunno. I look forward to finding out though, and I think Malfoys a big fat liar. I think he knows where our Snapey poo is and he's just not telling. lol

    Love it! - Jessica
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 28, 2005
    Oh yeah! I really like this one!, even if I am a big fan of yours.

    Starting it off really nice and slow, bringing into the fold more of the characters and some of the expected plot. Just love your style.

    I noticed that the first chapter seemed out of sync. When do you place Harry's birthday? Not in July, as it was cold outside.

    still on the same day, the second chapter made reference to Harry at the bar on the first day of Hogwarts School - September??? and

    I think there was one other reference to a 'time shift'. Not a problem for me, but you may want to change it to a cooler late summer day or something. NOT A FLAME, I LOVE YOU!!!!!

    but I really love the candy descriptions, so cute, Harry hated the green ones! lol

    Seamus is a GHOST????

    Awwww, Harry is going to look for Severus, Geez, I wish they find each other and fall in love. WHAT???! Oh, yea, YOUR STORY!!!!!

    Sorry, continue on and don't get sick from too many sugar sweets and gum. Oh, an post often, the first 5 chapters were just great!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hambares on May 27, 2005
    Thanx for the three chapter update! That was great! Five chapters in and I am hooked. Can't wait to see what happens next. Wonder how Draco will react to Harry and his request?
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  • From FairyPoet on May 27, 2005
    Did i ever tell you, you are my favorite Snarry writer? Well you are. I worship the ground you walk on. Hurray for another snarry story!


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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on May 27, 2005
    Brilliant chapters, thank you.
    One question answered Ron's just a good friend and with Hermione.
    Picked up something, Whats wrong with Snapes hands, that's worrying
    he always loved Potions, with damage to his hands would he be able
    to brew, or am I finding plots within plots.
    Hope you're feeling better, I noticed you sometimes slip in poetry in your
    stories, do you write poems? be great if one could be included in a story.
    Best wishes to a really good writer.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on May 26, 2005
    Ooh I really like this fic. It is kinda wierd though, how Harry and Ron share a bed. I know Rons seeing Hermione, so is it like to comfort Harry with his nightmares and stuff?

    Love it! Cant wait to see some more of it soon
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  • From En4cerMax on May 26, 2005
    I do like this. It's getting pretty interesting. Please, do keep going. I'd love to see how our Potions Master turned out. Is he going to look like shit? Or did he keep up his apperances? Hopefully Draco won't be such a prat. :)
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  • From ANON - Sarah V. on May 26, 2005
    I like how this story is starting and I hope you continue. I'm sorry about your other fic I'm a huge fan of your work and I hope that you won't let some people's comments put you down. Keep up the great work and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - canis_major on May 26, 2005
    This story looks promising. Just like the other one. You really shouldn't listen to those mindless idiots who flamed your work. They wouldn't know great writing if it slapped them in the face!! I am a true fan of your work and would hate to lose such a great piece of writing to read. It is amazing! I (and i'm sure a lot of people would agree) would love it if you re-posted ypur story - even if it was on a different site. You shouldn't let an incredible piece of work go to waste just like that! I'll be checking in hope everyday to see if you have re-posted.
    Please.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on May 26, 2005
    Hey Riffraff, I love this one!! Cant wait to see some more. Are you gonna post the other fic up on any other site, or is it gone forever?

    Love it so far! - Jessica
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  • From ANON - alliekatgal on May 26, 2005
    An interesting start. Have to wonder at Harry and Ron sharing a bed - friends, room mates, lovers? I love the thought of Luna being Harry's boss! I have to say that I'm sorry you took down the other story. It had a great start, and looked to be very promising. You've had lots of great reviews for stories like Where Others Fear to Tread, and I hate to see you stop posting because of idiots. Maybe you'd think about posting it at one of the groups where only members have access,like SnapexHarryML or After Class. You'd still have an audience of ~4000 people, and there seems to be much less undeserved obnoxious reviewing done there. I'd love to know if you decide to continue on with it, because your writing is good, with interesting characters and plots.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on May 26, 2005
    Can't wait to see where your creativity takes this one! More please...
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  • From ANON - eve/roarke on May 26, 2005
    I think its a promising start. Where's Snape, why is Remus getting his Wolfsbane
    from somewhere else? Are Harry and Ron together in this story? lots of questions hopefully
    soon lots of answers.

    Liked the first nine chapters of pulled fanfic so to all those who sent flames to
    RiffRaff.

    YOU'RE ALL JEALOUS DICK HEADS.
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