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Reviews for The Broom Closet *redone*

By : Crystal56
  • From ANON - tweenyrules on June 07, 2005
    Hiya, liked this story the first time round, it is even better now! Look forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - woof on June 06, 2005
    Share the marshmallows!!!!!!!! Still liking this story!!!!!! Poor hormonal Harry.....
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  • From ANON - Hambares on June 06, 2005
    Thanx for the update!
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  • From ANON - amanda on June 06, 2005
    great chapter update soon
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  • From ANON - amanda on June 06, 2005
    great chapter update soon
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  • From ANON - Phoenix 5 on June 06, 2005
    HI,
    I like this version very, very much, don't make us wait too long for next chapter.

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  • From ANON - Blackrose on June 05, 2005
    Irene, you're a major cow. Just read you review and it's spiteful. Bet you haven't done any good stories. Don't worry, if you have I'll be sure to flame them. I agree with the other reviewers and writer. Bugger off. Go flame your own stories, if you have any.
    With that out the way, keep up with the GREAT work on this story. It's really cool.
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  • From ANON - Blackrose on June 05, 2005
    Ok, now that was weird. Lol. Was that a side fic or a part of the story? Just wondering. Hope Sev makes up his mind soon. Hope he becomes a Father. By the way, good one, when you havd a go at that irene character. Man is she ever snotty. If she doesn't like a fic, she should piss off to another one and read something else. IRENE, PISS OFF! STOP DISSING THIS FIC BECAUSE IT'S REALLY GREAT! IDIOT!
    Looking forward to reading more of your story.
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  • From ANON - Rachel on June 05, 2005
    hahahahaha, I love the who-should-be-bottom forum. Very funny.

    Oh, before I forget: Irene, bugger off.

    And why exactly your fic is not original? Too many closet fics? Too many Harry/Snape fics? Too many mpreg fics? Get real, after a while it's obvious that a few fics will have some details in common. Nothing wrong in that. The important thing is how you write it, how good you are when writting your plot. (BTW you are doing a terrific job).

    Well, that's what I wanted to say and I also wanted to ask: Is it done? Are there any more chapters coming on? If so (I do hope so) please up date.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on June 05, 2005
    Did you get that out of your system? You gave me a great laugh. Now I can go to bed with a smile on my face! On with the story.....keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - amanda on June 04, 2005
    i look forward to read more of this story
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  • From ANON - amanda on June 04, 2005
    i look forward to read more of this story
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  • From ANON - woof on June 04, 2005
    Oh, I love the discussion!!!!! What a giggle on a slow night. Thank you!!!!!!! My thought, you could have them switch top/bottom weekly or daily and both get pregnant. That would stir up a whole nother can o' worms!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Irene on June 03, 2005
    I hated this story when it was first done..why exactly was it done a second time?? It's badly written. The characters are badly developed, and shallow. Your harry is irritating. The Harry Potter as a Virgin Bottom stories are bad enough and common enough that it gets boring. Why is it that everyone must write Harry off as a bottom? Aren't there enough of those laying around? Haven't you ever read the fanfiction written by Seeker? Now Seeker is the best slash writter in Harry Potter Fanfiction. Maybe you should read a few to know what a great is like, what originality is like. Then maybe just maybe you could develop your smut scenes. And get out of the dump everyone is in that writes stories where Snape is a top rather then the rare bottom Snape.
    That's all the constructive critism i can give you at the moment. I would say "no offense" but i have the feeling you will not take that as truth.
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  • From ANON - amy on June 03, 2005
    more more more!!!!!! hehehe
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