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Reviews for The Broom Closet *redone*

By : Crystal56
  • From ANON - akuma_river on June 03, 2005
    I love it.

    Some fics have them accept it right away, this is more realistic.

    Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix 5 on June 03, 2005
    HI,

    I'll not answer for the contest, because I read it once. I like it and am very glad you have rewrite, so I can re-read it in there.
    So Thanks
    Phoenix
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  • From ANON - Hambares on June 03, 2005
    Good luck, Harry! Snapes just going to have to get over his fainting.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on June 02, 2005
    Loved it. Please continue to write more of it. Loved the song in it too.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 31, 2005
    OH, the second time is just as great. Love this story. Ingenius invention this closet.

    Hmmm, plot bunny....Seeing how Harry was a virgin and Severus took that virginity, I'm imagining that they will try this again, the proper way, without the pain (OUCH! just hurts to think about it), either that or another venue(s) will be found to do this again. Both were panting with arousal, so I'm thinking that they really enjoy each other, even though outwardly they put up a front. I'm not sure if MPREG comes into this, as powerful magic and/or a special potion is ususally necessary, but then again....maybe.....????

    At any rate, Harry and Severus would have a secret to share and that would bring them closer together, as much as they dare.

    Too obvious???? Let's see.....
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  • From ANON - aj on May 31, 2005
    I loved the original one I hope this ones just as good! please write more!
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  • From ANON - kneazler on May 31, 2005
    Dear Writer,
    You absolutely MUST update this story. As it is posted now, it IS on AFFN, unless I am confused as to where I am. Please update! Delightful premise, to be sure.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 30, 2005
    Yes, I want you to update and rather quickly too!!! I've read the previous version and couldn't resist the improved version.

    Your talent keeps me reading more, and Harry and Severus really do make a 'funny' couple, *snorts*.

    Please, more, and soon!
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  • From ANON - Hambares on May 30, 2005
    Keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - betty on May 30, 2005
    Amusing! I love it. Professor Snape seemed not be very cold in this archive, but Harry is vivid.Really looking forward to future chapters.!
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  • From ANON - momoko on May 30, 2005
    good story
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  • From ANON - Storm on May 30, 2005
    Keep posting, this story has the potential to be great, funny and hot. I can't wait to read the next update
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  • From ANON - amanda on May 30, 2005
    great chapter update soon
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  • From ANON - foxfire on May 29, 2005
    "your stories really good! please update!"
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Black on May 29, 2005
    Great so far! Ron's reaction was priceless! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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