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Reviews for The Holidays Are Here

By : Willie
  • From ANON - freya on December 29, 2006
    wow that was great!!! i can't wait for the next part. i really don't see much if anything thing wroung in the way You write just keep the stories coming your a natural writer.

    ankishly wanting
    ~freya
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  • From ANON - Mav on November 29, 2006
    I loved it!
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  • From ANON - hpf2114 on January 10, 2006
    You have a good story going. Slow your time line down a bit, there is a long time between christmas and the end of the school year, and there are still many ways to do in that rat bag draco and friends. You are writing this as a learning experience, and there are a lot of things to learn. Take it slow, and put some thought into it. You'll do fine.
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  • From ANON - vonHardenberg on October 02, 2005
    Technically and mechanically well written. I liked your restraint in not using scatological language where it did not fit or for exclamations. It is hard to strike a balance between sexually explicit writing and foul mouth drivel. You do it well. I hope you will continue this. I am anxious to know the secret of the "lesson book".
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  • From ANON - Mishra on August 19, 2005
    This really is outstanding stuff, great work. I'm looking forward to the second part, but you made a small mistake. Ginny has brown eyes, it is said in the second novel. you might want to fix that mistake.
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  • From ANON - ~Kat~ on July 28, 2005
    I liked it! Please write some more harry/ginny soon.
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  • From on June 17, 2005
    okay the thing that confuses me is What in the hell is that book thingy? hmmmm? that's the only question i have.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 07, 2005
    This was incredibly hot.
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  • From ardane1 on June 07, 2005
    Lovely, Great, love your writing style and wit.
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  • From Willie on June 06, 2005
    Good catch! I ripped that line from "A knight's Tale". I just couldn't help it. The entire time I worked on Ch 5, all I could think about was Jocylen and William's relationship from the flick. I hope they don't sue me.
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  • From ANON - Manda on June 06, 2005
    Wow...very nice ...I can't wait to read the next installment...I have a question though, do any of you know where that line "Oh but I am yours..." in chapter 5 was from?
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  • From on June 06, 2005
    I really liked your fic. your love scenes were very well written. I had no problem imagining the four Gryffindors having sex. I really liked it when Hermione beat the crap out of Malfoy. Can't wait to read the sequel.
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  • From ANON - Alex V on June 06, 2005
    Where the third chapter?
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  • From ANON - gray_lord_of_disorder on June 06, 2005
    i thought this was a good read. i was wondering if you have ever writen any thing other than things like this for you obveusly has wrighting talint.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on June 05, 2005
    Good music. I could actually hear it in my mind while I was reading. Excellent sex in this fic, BTW.
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