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Reviews for Trust and secrecy

By : Sakya
  • From ANON - sbkar on June 06, 2005
    Harry signed in relieve, his mind was finally clearing.

    Shouldn't that be: sighed, not signed; relief, not relieve????

    Dobby, please, not Dolby (we don't have surround-sound in the fics just yet)

    a spy in the Dark Lords ranks. Change that to "the Dark Lord's ranks"
    to fit the possessive tense.

    Not too shabby of a story thus far. Just some grammatical errors and some spelling snafus. More?????
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  • From ANON - amanda on June 06, 2005
    look forward to read more
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  • From ANON - Brittany on June 06, 2005
    oh yhe excitment!!! please update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - KU on June 06, 2005
    OMG!! Another chapter, please!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on June 06, 2005
    Argh! What happens? Need chapter 2!
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  • From ANON - Eloradanin on June 06, 2005
    not bad keep going and update soon
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on June 06, 2005
    you always write the most amazing stories.. please update again soon... both fics.. please!
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  • From Trinity18 on June 06, 2005
    This is an amazing fic. I really like what you have so far. I just have one suggestion it would be cool if you could explain how much time has passed that Harry has been in Azkaban. I hope you post more soon.
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