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Reviews for The Last Goodbye.

By : Helbling
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 05, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 30, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - cupotrevor on November 22, 2005
    can't see the keys for all the tears..amazing i could feel everything severus was feeling..really very good...
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 20, 2005
    Heartbreaking is all i can say.
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on June 09, 2005
    Sure, I'll see if I can find it again. I read it about 6 or 7 months ago. Although after your explanation, I'm sure it's just as you said a coincidence. My friend's father was on the plane that hit the first tower and she had wished he had a chance to call her.
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  • From ANON - sammie on June 08, 2005
    *2 thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - Strawberryblush on June 07, 2005
    Hi - I'll have to assume it is a disturbing similarity. I dabbled in Logan/Marie fic about 5 years ago, but it was something of a short stay, most of my previous stuff is Pitch Black/Vin Diesel related. This piece was triggered by someone mentioning a WIKTT challenge on Ashwinder entitled 'Final Goodbye' (or something similar, it was in the author's notes and I've managed to loose the link), which combined with a conversation I'd just had with my housemates about who you'd call if you knew you were going to die, and what you'd say, which in turn was triggered, as Bambu guessed in her review, by the calls made by those on the 9/11 flights. Hermione wasn't initially pregnant when I wrote this the first time around, but that version came out at under 500 words, and seemed incredibly shallow for the situation, so I tried to bulk it out and adopted what seems to be an oft-used plot device in HG/SS and made her pregnant, which only added 300 words or so, but seemed to give it the necessary gravity needed. Could I have the URL to the story you mentioned, so I can see just how far the similarites go? Thanx
    ~S.b
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  • From ANON - Jasmine on June 07, 2005
    Hi. This story seem disturbingly similar to a Logan/Marie Fic - including being cornered, calling his loved one, who is pregnant and telling her he loved her before he kills himself. I hope it's just an amazing coincidence.
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  • From ANON - wolfen on June 06, 2005
    Damn! That was sad. Well written, but now I need to go find some fluff to read.
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  • From Bambu on June 06, 2005
    This reminded me strongly of the number of phone calls loved ones received from those about to die on the commandeered planes on 9/11 in the US. Very clever of you to have captured those last moments in such a poignant and bittersweet moment. It was also refreshing to see that you used Muggle devices for Snape. It's too bad he didn't fire a couple of rounds into the door and take a couple of Death Eaters with him.
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on June 06, 2005
    OMG! How very sad! That broke my heart. Good writing, though.
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  • From ANON - Pixi on June 06, 2005
    awww man, now I'm crying. That was lovely.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on June 06, 2005
    Very sad, great job.
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