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Reviews for Parallels

By : vertejaune
  • From Persy on September 02, 2021

    Just a really good story.


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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 07, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 30, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From slygriff21 on June 14, 2005
    Interesting story. I like it! This one is by far one of the most intersting stories I've read in a while. Great writing! Keep it up!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Susan on June 12, 2005
    That was so sad. I think an epilogue would definitely tie things up nicely, but as it stands is fine as well. It leaves the reader wondering what happens to all those involved. Well done.
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  • From ANON - smartypants on June 12, 2005
    I've read both stories. You took a lot more than just the format from Buttercup's story.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on June 11, 2005
    Please write an epilogue! Please please please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2005
    Hmmm... interesting thoughts. Like that it is just Hermione, keeps it simple. I wish I could say this stuff doesn't happen, but it does. I like the parallel between the healthy relationship and the unhealthy ones.
    Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Pen to Sword on June 10, 2005
    Thanks for the fast update. Wow. Gully is a fucking bastard. Grrrr...Taking advantage of her. I really like this story. I wonder what Severus is going to do...
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  • From ANON - abbi cee on June 09, 2005
    I hadn't realized there were other chapters when I left my first review for chapter 1. Normally I read everything that's there and leave a combined review. I'm still not sure I buy Hermione's doubts about her and Snape's relationship. I would be surprised if she didn't have a few doubts now and then, but I can't see them steming from reading the diary of a young, very immature girl who was, unfortunately, taken advantage of by a predatory teacher. Without knowing the background of her and Snape's relationship it's hard to see the parallels between her and Laura. Hermione is a smart, mature young woman, Laura is a young girl without a lot of maturity or intelligence, if her diary is anything to go by. Presumably Hermione entered into her relationship fully aware of what she was getting into, Laura barely understood sex, nevermind relationships. Hermione and Snape are keeping their relationship quiet, but a few of their friends know, that's a far cry from keeping it a deep dark secret. I can't help but think the parallels of the story would make more sense if Hermione were still a student in Hogwarts in a forbidden relationship with Snape. Then her fears and second guessing about her and Snape's relationship would fit the story better.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on June 09, 2005
    Oh my god! Please update soon! Please! I love this story so much!
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  • From ANON - abbi cee on June 09, 2005
    Interesting start, I feel sorry for Laura who is obviously insecure, but seems very young. From the writing in her diary I would have put her age closer to 13 or 14. I think Hermione needed to cut the umblilical cord before she ran off with the baby. Why are all those people there? Poppy should be throwing out anyone who isn't working on Laura or the baby.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 09, 2005
    This is a lot like I Know What You Do In The Dungeons http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=17848. Is that where you got the idea?
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  • From ANON - Miari on June 09, 2005
    Please, please, please have SOMEone at LEAST beat the living shit out of Gully. I must admit that with that brother of hers I was surprised that she was virgo intacta when Gully got to her.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on June 09, 2005
    Now we're getting to it! Hermione's reaction is really plausible. I hope she can figure out a way to distinguish herself from the sick, abused diary girl, though. So sad!! I hope she hexes all appendages from the DADA teacher, too. Ewww!
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