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Reviews for The Holidays Are Here, Part II

By : Willie
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 21, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - vonHardenberg on October 02, 2005
    I would have liked to find out about the "lesson book". This section was not up to the same quality of the first, sorry to say. It is hard to write as you go. Do you have a complete outline of where your general story direction is leading. Something you and other male writers should have is a sexually experienced female that can check you for realism. If you wish to deviate from realism, it must have a mechanism to get you there. Even teenagers wear out unless some "cause" intervenes. Female experience and knowledge of their anatomy is helpful. Sorry to be so critical, but I figured you might want an objective but honest feedback. Keep up the good work and write more. Try a beta version to better your approach.
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  • From ANON - me on September 17, 2005
    coooooool
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  • From ANON - Mishra on August 20, 2005
    Outstanding, really outstanding. I really look forward to the next chapters. Oh and btw, i posted it already in the first part, Ginny got brown eyes, read the chamber of secrets again mate.
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  • From ANON - ~Kat~ on July 29, 2005
    ::mists up:: so sweet! but tonks and snape? ewwwwww! sorry i guess its personal prefence... great fic! Hope to see more from you soon!
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  • From ANON - satanthedarkprince on July 14, 2005
    Woohoo!
    I crown you the glorious king/queen? of smutfic!!!! Truly marvellous writing!!
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  • From ANON - wookieejedi on July 05, 2005
    umm i jsut reread the first instalment, and i was wondering if you were ever gong to explane what the present ron gave to hermonie for christmas was?
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  • From ANON - h/g lover on June 19, 2005
    plz, Sara its a engagement ring
    dont be so dents
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  • From ANON - Sara on June 18, 2005
    plz write more i wanna know what she meant by her not deserving the ring or harry plz write more
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  • From ANON - dragon34 on June 15, 2005
    I really loved the 'Bad Hermione ' and ' Good Hermione '. That was really hot. I also loved the chapter with Snape and Tonks. He is so hot. I would let him cut my clothes off, and slap me around. Can't wait to see more from you, keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Semperputus on June 10, 2005
    Wow you do hot smut! What's going on with Severus? And will Hermione get her wish of being totally filled? Can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - Dude on June 09, 2005
    Nice chappie dawg.....real smuttacular ;) lol

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  • From ANON - fanficnut on June 09, 2005
    Loving it! Please please please continue, and keep updating!I'm addicted to reading it!
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  • From ANON - Bashy on June 08, 2005
    whoah man that was great!!!! I just had the best wank of my LIFE!!!!!!!!! AND IVE BEEN DOING IT FOR YEARS!!!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!! KEEP WRITING PLZ!!!
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  • From ANON - The tipper on June 08, 2005
    Smut and more Smut not that I am complaining nothing is fair in love and war lets get it on!!!!!!!
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