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Reviews for It Is the East and She Is the Sun

By : BotticellisAngel
  • From ANON - Hypatia on November 23, 2005
    "Thou wilt fall backward when thou hast more wit..." -R & J, 1.3

    Is the smut coming? The Bard would apprecitate it.
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  • From ANON - BOOTTLICIOUS on October 20, 2005
    where's the update?
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  • From ANON - Caz on October 16, 2005
    Fantabulous! more more more!
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  • From slygriff21 on October 10, 2005
    Great chapter! I'm glad you finally updated! I can't wait to read more. Update soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on October 10, 2005
    Thanks for updating this. I thought you had abandoned us. I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Laura on October 10, 2005
    Nice...this has the makings of a very good story. I know I want to read more and I'll be waiting for updates.
    L
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  • From ANON - Cristie on October 10, 2005
    Hmmmm, you say you want this to be short but I see this getting away from you a bit. You have such a nice slow build up going I am hoping you will stretch this out to be at least ten chapters. You know I love your stories so I'll keep reading.
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  • From ANON - firewall on October 10, 2005
    I had forgotten about this story and enjoyed re-reading the chapters you've written. Am I correct in assuming that now you have finished your other story, you'll be concentrating on this one? I hope so. Looking forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Barbara on October 10, 2005
    Loving it so far, can not wait to see where this goes. Update again soon.
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  • From ANON - curls on September 26, 2005
    Iteresting premise and I will continue to read it through. Please get a beta. You have numerous grammar mistakes. Review proper use of creating possessives; for most the apostrophe comes before the s ie Hermione's hand-you continuously put it after the s which is only correct if the word is already plural or naturally ends with an s ie Severus'. You also need to review punctuation and capitalization rules for speech in quotes; the part with the person's name and how they said something is usually not capitalized ie. "Yes," she said. Notice the she said is not capitalized as it is not by itself a sentence in this case and it is set off by a preceding comma. I don't know if it is due to the often wonky formatting of AFF, but I noticed in chap 1 that just about every sentence is formatted as a separate paragraph when many should be combined into a cohesive paragraph. Keep up the story.
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  • From ANON - AnyuBoo on July 28, 2005
    I REALLY like your story. It is well-written and holds my interest. I thought I saw you say it might be longer than you first intended? YAY! I hope so, it's worth the read. :)
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  • From ANON - Edya on July 27, 2005
    It's quite good. Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Sevenew (who is too lazy to log in) on July 27, 2005
    i'm not going to lie to you.... i LOVE this fanfic. I really hope you update soon and fast because it looks like it's going somewhere really good.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on July 27, 2005
    This is briliant!!!

    I hope you update soon!!!

    I love how Crookshanks loves Severus... brilliant!!!
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  • From slygriff21 on July 27, 2005
    I loved this new chapter! Please update again and soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

    Tiffany
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