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Reviews for Hybrid Destiny

By : fazed
  • From ANON - Taiyukai on June 22, 2005
    haha! Ron got it good! neways thanks for updating! cant wait for the next i think the Creatures class is going to be interesting....
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  • From ANON - JJ on June 22, 2005
    Thank you, thank you, thank you.

    You updated, you sweetheart you!

    Harry is pretty powerful. Draco and Herm. are on their way to being friends. Lupin, Snape, and Malfoy? (Do we get to see any action?). And lots of happy fluff!!! Now your only problem is Ron, but every story has to have a bad guy. Just so long as Ron doesn't betray Harry to Voldy out of spite. What creature is Harry going to charm in magical creatures? I like happy endings. Will Harry have any more unexpected surprises in his future because of his heritage? How about hooking Herm. up with Blaise?
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  • From ANON - Missi on June 21, 2005
    I'm sad that Harry doesn't have an Anamagus form, but I liked the trick with the owls. I am glad that he's not a predatory cat or a snake, though. That's slightly played, while still totally cool (obviously) Thanks for the update, and I can't wait until you update again!! And I love the redundancy of Ron!!
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  • From ANON - sbkar on June 21, 2005
    Love the owls as revenge!!! Bigots, especially jealous bigots deserve the most pranks of all...
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  • From ANON - miso on June 21, 2005
    ok... its a bit more than grammer and writing technique... its rushed.. quite a bit too...- i suggest u make the chapters longer and more detailed.. it ruins the fun if you dont write with detail and patience. the plot was quite intresting and it was pretty much the only thing that kept me reading. i suggest you go back and make it interesting. it will be absolutely PERFECT if you do. best wishes-
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  • From ANON - miso on June 21, 2005
    amazing plot i say.. but i greatly disapprove of your grammer and writing technique.. they seem a bit.. immature. keep working at it and i'm sure you'll write better. a story is more intresting to read if it is written perfectly and flawlessly. good story plans!
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  • From ANON - Missi on June 21, 2005
    I was just reading some of the other posts (which I do from time to time for no apparant reason, really) and I just wanted to tell you not to listen to morons. Like the one right before my first post today. They didn't have to type the marshmallow roasting shit (and then try n say it's not) telling you what you have to do to be a writer. Would we loyals read it (and eagerly await the yummy updates) if it sucked? NO. Screw em all-don't change. We like it, and you need to be true to you, in your writing and all you do. The way you're writing is you, don't let morons change you. Just wanted to get that off my chest, and let you know that there are people who like your story. INCLUDING THE WINGS. (Like I said, I was reading the posts....)
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  • From ANON - Missi on June 21, 2005
    Thanks so much for updating! This story totally rocks and I just can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Bluumberry on June 21, 2005
    Personally, I like the idea, but you have merged a little too many cliches into it to make it a good one. The flow of the story is too quick and no emotions can be felt from it. I also find your writing style a little boring at times. The characters are too ooc at times, as it seems you just write them like you think fits but isn't the character at all. This is not a flame, for if it were, I'd would have damned the story straight and not given my critisizim. Just because people give critique doens't mean it's a flame and you need to put yourself down. Think about the things I've told you and try to make yourself better.
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  • From ANON - manx on June 21, 2005
    I like these type of stories, but....(there's always a "but", isn't there?) I find it VERY boring that every one of them has to have Harry develop wings!! Come on now. The story line would work out just as well without them and be more believeable. It's just that almost every story about Harry's Inheritance has him sprouting wings. Can someone direct me to a good story without the "wing thing"?
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  • From ANON - sbkar on June 21, 2005
    Chapter 20 review: I guess this is more a formatting pointer. The paragraphs would be more readable if
    there were a space between them; I found myself rereading paragraphs because the lines ran together.
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  • From ANON - Aisling on June 21, 2005
    wow great update... Herm' is sooo cute LOl :D
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  • From ANON - Alexa on June 21, 2005
    Could you clarify something? First time Harry uses Fae glamor and looks like Snape, Draco deosn't even notice that Harry changed. A few line later however, he confirmend that Harry took the glamor off. So how does Draco see/sense the glamor exactly? Is it just transparent and he always sees Elf/Fae Harry, or does he notice the glamor in some way? If he notices, then how exactly does it look to him?
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  • From ANON - lilywood on June 21, 2005
    I absolutely LOVE this story!!! I am very glad it's not going to be a threesome with Lucius. I like just Harry and Draco together. Post soon!!
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  • From ANON - taiyukai on June 20, 2005
    i have a really bad feeling about Ron now... hopefully he doesnt do nething to rash... love the story tho!
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