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Reviews for Learning her lesson

By : Luz
  • From dristi on April 15, 2009
    hi,....pretty hot story...hope to read more soon...

    keep up!
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  • From ANON - me on November 25, 2005
    i have to be honest im not a haryy potter fan the only movie i like sort of is # 3 though i do like snape hes hot, in fact im still not sure why i decied to read this ficbut im glad i did cuase this was good and that means a lot coming from a hary hater like me
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2005
    Mmmm...this is even better than the other one. Delicious! (And lots of Snape action, which is always lovely!) I very much enjoyed your two stories with Severus, Remus, and Emmy, but I'd love to see a longer fic from you that's more Snape-centered. Dom!Severus is so, so very sexy that he deserves a submissive of his very own, don't you think? (And I'd be more than happy to volunteer of course!) Well, thanks for posting such yummy smut and please write more! Cheers. :)
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  • From ANON - silverslake on June 17, 2005
    Hm... What do I think? Bad? NO! Good? YESSS! Sequel? Of course! It itches for one! :D
    Dom!Sev I love! Can we resurrect Sirius for an encounter and have a foursome, please? ^_^ *deliciously dirty thoughts* mmm.... But anyway, hurry up with chapter two! ;)
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  • From on June 11, 2005
    Delicious! Yes please, more!! Very skillfully paced - and Dom!Snape is my favourite. Can't wait to see another chapter, or some more of something.

    Your English is great - there were just a couple of times I'd notice it's not your mother tongue, if you don't mind me saying so. "rude fabric" - we'd say "coarse" rather than rude. Severus' *hair* is greasy, not "hairs", and he'd be *grabbing* rather than "fisting roughly". (All meant to be helpful, not criticise, so I hope you don't mind.)
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