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Reviews for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

By : ShilohDarke
  • From ANON - dragon34 on June 19, 2005
    Your fic is so romantic, I love it. It almost reminds me of Phantom of the Opera, with the scared face, and the hiding in his own home. The soap and shampoo was a great idea, I wish I had some of that.
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  • From ANON - RandH4ever on June 19, 2005
    You should change "Harmony" to a different name. "Hermione" and "Harmony" are too close, namewise.
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  • From ANON - Ms_black on June 17, 2005
    I think you've got something there. Continue it can develop into a great story.
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  • From ANON - Maggie on June 16, 2005
    YES this is an idea worth pursuing. I think the idea is beautiful. The finding inner-good within the supposed "evil", not the rape and murder. Please update soon :-).
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  • From ANON - Ane Marie on June 13, 2005
    Hi, I've read a few Hermione/Lucius fics and I can definitly say your approach is new and refreshing . I very much like how it started out and yes perhaps Lucius is a bit ooc but its more than understandable considering the plot like you imagined (Beauty and the Beast Fans Rejoice ) . In other words :D Keep up the Good Work and Pleeeaaase Update soon , really soon .... Tomorrow Perhaps :D . A starved Reader
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 13, 2005
    great story. i love what you have done with the story so far. keep posting and i will try to keep reviewing for you though i'm not very good at it. keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - LadyMalfoy730 on June 13, 2005
    Interesting concept. Update soon. i wanna see what happens!
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  • From Lolita96malfoy on June 13, 2005
    Looks like a promising story line! Good luck with it, i look forward to the next chapter

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  • From on June 13, 2005
    There is more then one way to be proud, Lucius can still be a proud pureblood, while being injured. I'm sure not all of him is injured. We all know that Lucius is a beautiful man under the scar tissue.
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  • From ANON - Shannon on June 10, 2005
    Hmm well he may very well be OOC but I think having those things happen in front of him would defintely change him but it would also make him bitter, angry and depressed. So as long as he stays "seemingly" indifferent to Hermiones charming appearance then it will work just fine. I too am a fan of beauty and the beast and so if you follow that I think it will work out great. It seems you are heading in a good direction with this so I am sure it will be lovely. I am curious so see how close this is going to come to the actual beauty and the beast story. Since he was cursed and someone had to love him in order for him to change to his true form, I am wondering if the same kind of thing will work for Lucius or will his scarred appearence remain with him forever and she will then have to accept him the way he is. Hmm this has the makings for a really good story and I am anxious for you to continue with it. I read your other fic and I really liked it so I have faith you will do a nice job with this one as well. So anyhow I like what you have started with even though it was kinda sad, Draco from the books is a real git but I rather like his character from the fics I have read with him in it so I didnt like to see him die but I know it was necessary for the story. I also noticed that it has some resemblance to Phantom of the Opera, with his face being scarred on one side like that so that would be something very interesing as well. ok enough of my drabble here, thumbs up, good luck, and I shall happily and hopefully patiently wait for more of this story. Cheers!
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  • From ANON - Hope on June 09, 2005
    This is so interesting, I feel bad for Lucius. Please keep on writting.
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  • From ANON - kbluesmom on June 09, 2005
    Powerful. I have never seen LM portrayed like this. It is a very powerful image that you have evoked. Every other fanfic that has Lucius as a main character makes him out to be a right bastard. They don't evewn skim the surface of WHAT made him the way he is. True he is an elitist snob and can be exceedingly arrogant, but maybe it was because it was forced on him not chosen. I really like the way this isstartinng out. I like backstory in the fics that I read. Keep me posted on updates if you have the time or inclination. BTW.. i just finished your other fic HG/SS. Great stuff there too. If this site had a favorites catagory, yours would be in mine. Keep up the good writing.
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  • From ANON - ana-apple on June 09, 2005
    I'm a big fan of your writting. Please continue on, I'm interested to see where this goes. Please update soon.
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