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Reviews for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

By : ShilohDarke
  • From ANON - firewall on October 17, 2005
    Ahhh, a happy ending. I enjoyed it thoroughly...I did chuckle a bit though at the thought of Lucius being related to Merlin. Nice little twist. Thank you for sharing your story with us and I hope you find another story to tell.
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on October 17, 2005
    This is bloody amazing!! I hope you write more fics in the future. Your style is great. This story is great. I love it!!
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  • From ANON - Alexia on October 17, 2005
    OH MY GOD I CANNOT BELIEVE ITS OVER .....(SNIFF SNIFF SNIFF) ......WOW THIS STORY WAS AMAZING FROM START TO FINISH I LOVED IT MORE THAN I CAN SAY AND YOU WHAT A BRILLIANT WRITER YOU ARE I WAS DRAWN IN WITH THE CHARACTERS I CRIED WHEN THEY CRIED LAUGHED AT THEIR JOKES WAS ANGRY WHEN THEY DID. I JUS CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER I LOVED IT THIS FINAL CHAPTER WAS EVERYTHING I COULD HAVE HOPED FOR AND MORE OH GOD I HAD TO TAKE A MOMENT AND PAUSE READING TO CRY WHEN LUCIUS DIED I EVEN E-MAILED MY FRIEND WHO HAS NEVER READ THIS STORY AND SHE FELT BAD. I CANT WAIT FOR THE FOLLOW UP WITH SEVERUS AND GINNY I CANT WAIT THIS HAS BEEN AN AMAZING READ AND I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK . LOVE YOU SOO MUCH HUGS AND KISSES

    ALEXIA
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  • From ANON - kbluesmom on October 17, 2005
    That ending was perfect! I nearly went spare when Lucius fell. I was about to cry when poof..Merlin showed up! You are truly one of the best writers I have ever read. Thank you for allowing me into your world. Writing like you have exhibited here comes not only form knowledge of the characters, but from the wordsmith that puts their very soul on onto a piece of paper or screen. Long may you guide us into the worlds you create. (Giving you a standing ovation)
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  • From ANON - dragon34 on October 17, 2005
    Although I am sad to see the story end, I'm glad that it ended on a good note.
    I can't wait to read about Severus and Ginny.
    Please keep me on your e-mail list, I would love to be kept up to date about your new
    stories, and their updates.


    Jeannette
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 17, 2005
    Wow, brilliant!

    I cried when he died... then when Merlin came... hehehe... brought me right out of it!

    Well done on this!

    I hope at some point we get to see Hope growing up!
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  • From ANON - Trish on October 17, 2005
    WELL DONE!!! BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO!!!! Finished in a heavy way but ended on a light note.... and the opening for Severus and Ginny!! KUDOS! Take a break-- you deserve it! T
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  • From ANON - Michelle on October 17, 2005
    OH GOD! I REALLY DID CRY. I GUESS YOU WEREN'T THE ONLY ONE. LOL. I THOUGHT LUCIUS DIED. I LOVED WHAT MELIN SAID ABOUT LUCIUS'S PUNISHMENT. I THINK IT'S TRUE, IT'S NOT THE OUTSIDE THAT COUNTS BUT HE INSIDE. WHAT YOU FEEL IS FROM THE INSIDE NOT BY THE OUTSIDE. I GUESS HERMIONE AND LUCIUS GOT AN EXTRA BONUS. LOL. I THINK HE IS A REALLY BEAUTIFUL MAN KNOW. I HOPE UP AT LEAST WRITE A LITTLE, SWEET EPILOUGE, WHEN HOPE IS BORN. I HOPE YOU DO. I LOVE YOUR STORY VERY MUCH. I ALSO HOPE YOU WRITE A NEW STORY, SAD THIS STORY IS OVER IT WAS WELL WRITEN AND REALLY GOOD. I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH. HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU SOON.

    "WRITE AN EPILOUGE PLEASE*BEGGS ON KNEES* LOL.
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  • From ANON - angel on October 17, 2005
    ~crys~ men ypu scared me half to death by killing lucius and im glad that is a descendant of merlin man ... ~sniff sniff~ man and how snape tryed to hide that he was happy to go with ginny im gald that the dark lord is a shade .. now he will have a hard time getting in to a new body and hope is safe .... i cant wait in till the sequel sooooooooo please get it up soon and in till the keep up the awesome awesome work and thank you for a awesome story now im going to reread it and see when you post the new story which i know will be just as awesome maybe more so ... well in till then later for now and remember love peace and fan fics

    angel
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on October 16, 2005
    I was sobbing like a two year old who has spilled their candy in the mud when Lucius died. Actually, I might have cut my eyelid. Anyway, this is a great story. I have a huge soft spot for Lucius. The bad boys are so much fun.
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  • From ANON - tonkatrish on October 15, 2005
    Okay. I have been sitting here for the last 3 hrs consuming your story. I was and still am totally enthralled. You have an amazing talent. And you have acquired a new follower. But, there is a problem...........I am itching for an update already! I love the direction you have brought both Lucius's strength and vulnerability out when it comes to Hermione. And kept the petulant child form of Harry, when he discovers she is not to be his. Ron is shown as the mature one---finally. So sick of everyone portraying him as the sidekick schmuck-hothead with Quidditch for brains. Please add me to your update e-mails. My hubby won't like that I have another to follow, but, hey.... when it comes to HP/JKR, he says---"Woman you're killing me" and I reply ---"A slow and agonizing death"......But he is my Lucius ( the Beast DOES have inner beauty) And in case I tend to repeat myself..please add me to your e-mail updates......and soon!! Thanks much****** Trish
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  • From ANON - Sorceress Black on October 13, 2005
    Nice chapter, very interesting to see that Voldemort plans to continue his horrid little plans, I am curious to see how that developes. Yayyyy I was so glad to see Harry come back, and I liked how he finally realized that lucius has really changed. Nice bit of tension there with Ginny and Severus, I wonder how long she will be able to resist jumping our snarky friend. All in all a nicely done chapter with a healthy dose of lemons thrown in there at the end lol. The pleasantness of it is giving me the "calm before the storm" feeling though, so needless to say I am itching to see what's going to happen next. Keep up the great work cause no matter how busy I am I always find my way back to your story. :) Shan.
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  • From ANON - Alexia on October 11, 2005
    I LOVE IT I HONESTLY DO THE CHAPTER JUST SEEMS TO FLOW AND MAKE PERFECT SENSE. I WILL SING YOUR PRAISES. NOW ABOUT YOUR LAST COMMENT I QUITE AGREE WITH YOU IN FACT IN MOST OF THE STORIES I HAVE BEGUN WRITING POST HBP I HAVE STATED THE SAME IF NOT SIMILAR IDEAS THAT EITHER DUMBLEDORE WANTED IT TO HAPPEN OR THEY STAGED IT OR POLYJUICED IT OR SOMETHING SO YEAH JUST TO LET YOU KNOW THAT THERE ARE OTHERS OUT THERE WHO SHARE YOUR VIEWS. ANYWHOO I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS CHAPTER AS I ENJOY ALL YOUR WORK AND I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT UPDATE. LOTS OF LOVE HUGS AND KISSES ALEXIA.
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  • From ANON - kurtcouper on October 11, 2005
    I agree with you. I think Dumbledore would have planned it. Butt... I love the new chapter. It's great. Poor Hermione. I don't think I could ever live with the knowledge of killing someone, evil or not. Anyway, I love Voldie's new plan. It really is perfect.
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  • From ANON - dragon34 on October 11, 2005
    I have to believe in my heart, that Severus is still a good man, and that Dumbledor was asking him to finish the job, that the poison was doing. I also have to believe that Albus petrified Harry, because he knew that something would happen, and he didn't want Harry to get hurt, or killed. I think thats also the reason why Albus had Harry hide under his invisibility cloak.

    On a different matter. I love your story, can't wait to read more.
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