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Reviews for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

By : ShilohDarke
  • From ANON - fantasy_land on October 05, 2012
    that story was so beautiful !! I honestly cried ! twice ! thank you so much for sharing your story with the world, i appericate it :)
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  • From ANON - jkw625 on September 10, 2012
    As this story has been so very enjoyable I have blocked any grammatical, spelling or misapplied words out and would not write to you about them but... I am fairly sure word "emit" should have been used and not the word "omit" when Lucius is binding Voldemort's soul to exist only as a shade.
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  • From HexxKitten on June 27, 2010
    Ok where can I buy that bodywash?? I use dove and while I love it... It's not THAT good... lol great story so far, but writing this is keeping me from it ;) thanks for another great LM fic
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  • From on July 30, 2009
    Chapter nine broke my heart man...
    It was so sad.
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  • From ANON - Erin on January 28, 2009
    Hi--I read this story a long time ago, and I loved it. Lucius/Hermione is one of my favorite pairings, and I've enjoyed all of your work. Are you, by any chance, posting this story on fanfiction . net, under the name vertigo72? If this is NOT you, you should contact them immediately for plagiarizing this wonderful story!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 14, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?


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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 06, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From tambrathegreat on October 27, 2007
    Another chapter that's gotten me twice. I really feel for Harry. Especially when he says he's changed because of the war. Good writing.
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  • From tambrathegreat on October 25, 2007
    This is actually the second time I have read the story. The opening scene is always so wrenching. I feel slightly nauseous when I read it. I'm sure that's not what you were going for, but if it gets that visceral response after the second reading, it's well written.
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  • From COC89 on September 22, 2007
    My Dear, i must say this is the best harry fan fic i have ever read! I honestly wish everyday since beginning this story that you would write of a romance with such passion and depth as this, but be able to publish it. Make it up yourself. I would be a avid reader. But besides that i love your writing and imagination. I specially love how you added Merlin in the last bit. It was great, he reminded me of the headmasters bright side. Very weel done once again, and i hope you have many more stories to come.

    CC

    PS. I even cried at the end, what say you to that.
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  • From Utopia on July 30, 2007
    I am a real wuss when it comes to roses - one my boyfriend exploits on special occasions - I'd have melted on receiving one of those blooms!
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  • From Utopia on July 30, 2007
    I had wondered what made that eye useless - I had presumed it blind.

    You write that the scars are purple - is this similar to the scar Harry sports on his forehead?

    Instantly, your description of Lucius playing the piano reminded me of Davy Jones in Pirates of the Caribbean II - the same way he poured his heart into the piano. My boyfriend plays too, the house could fall down around him and he wouldn't notice until his fingers froze to the keys!

    Once again, a pleasure to read.
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  • From Utopia on July 30, 2007
    It is somewhat alarming that Lucius is viewing Hermione like you would look at an exibit in a museum or art gallery... but after all this time with no contact with anyone (BTW - how much time has passed since the torture he suffered?), perhaps he is as curious as a tourist?

    I'd love a shampoo that washed your hair for you! My hair is incredibly thick and half way down my back! (think Hermione without the curls and frizz)... if only that shampoo existed, with conditioner to match! I'd be in heaven (or, my boyfriend would pull his usual stunt and pinch my shampoo for his own use...)

    This chapter was a pleasure to read.
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  • From Utopia on July 30, 2007
    Your house-elf seems to have a very good vocabulary and sentence structure in comparison to the house-elves that JKR writes, most of the house-elves in the books talk like yoda from star wars (kind of simple and backwards). Apart from that, the second chapter was very good and has me captured in the plot.
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  • From Utopia on July 30, 2007
    I personally do not think Lucius is out of character; seeing as we know so little of him in the fist place... Personally, I love your idea of Lucius without the drop-dead-gorgeous asthetics; it makes him just that little bit more human. (BTW, have you ever read the Anita Blake series by Laurrel K Hamilton - there is a character with a very similar appearance to Lucius in that series.)
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