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Reviews for Deep Down and Dirty Thoughts . . .

By : Severuslave
  • From ANON - Pixi on June 19, 2005
    yes please continue. Would love to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - silverslake on June 18, 2005
    Yes please! Continue!
    Give them their well deserved detention, and make it hot! :D

    Good story, thanx.
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  • From ANON - Greer on June 18, 2005

    Ha! I haven't had a fic make me laugh out loud in quite a while! This is really cute.
    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Mary 22 on June 18, 2005
    Ohhhhhh I love this!!!! Are you going to continue this oh I hope you do! ;)
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  • From ANON - kcj on June 18, 2005
    definitely proceed to detention
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  • From ANON - lydia on June 18, 2005
    please continue. it would be interesting to see how far they are willing to take this.
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  • From slygriff21 on June 18, 2005
    I loved this chapter! It was great! As for the Detention story, yes, please continue it!

    Tiffany
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  • From goddessnape on June 18, 2005
    YESSSS!!! WRITE A DETENTION STORY!!!

    Please? :D
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  • From ANON - Katie K on June 18, 2005
    Yes, yes! Continue! Continue! Pppllleeeaaassseee continue!
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  • From ANON - Hannah on June 18, 2005
    Hehehe, amusing story. I like, I like! You should write a nice smutty detention scene! *sigh* HG/SS smut equals heaven.
    Good story, I'm going to see what else you have written right now!
    ~Hannah
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  • From ANON - Ailo on June 17, 2005
    I definitely think you should continue this story. It seems unfinished as it is, and I want to know what happens at detention, although I can make a fair guess... lol

    ~Ailo
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  • From ANON - anyah_daoc on June 17, 2005
    Oohhhh...very naughty, which makes it very nice for us, the readers. As much as I would love to see what happens in detention, the way the story is written seems complete in itself. It would be almost anticlimatic. Of course, maybe if you used this same writing style for an epilogue...say many years later, but leave it open for interpretation by the reader until you inform through dialogue that it is several years later and not just the next day...perhaps married or in lecture, or in the great hall during the sorting...rofl wouldn't that be hilarious. Thank you for a wonderful piece.
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  • From ANON - Sandra on June 17, 2005
    Continue HERE! I'm waiting!
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on June 17, 2005
    Hang on! Complete? No you can't be serious. Please give us at least detention.
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  • From ANON - missmaryrae on June 17, 2005
    Hahaha. Oh, I liked this one. It is hilarity.

    I don't know if you need to continue it. I think it ends just fine there, but I did like reading their thoughts. It's an interesting POV; it allows yourself to insert yourself into their positions more easily.
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