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Reviews for The Kindly Ones

By : Phorcys
  • From Hancock23 on July 04, 2017

    I feel as if the tone of the story changed from the first chapters to these current chapters...., now it sounds like a horrible romance-comedy movie.


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  • From Starfall on July 28, 2007
    Please say you plan to continue this story, Please =)
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  • From ANON - mousie on August 20, 2006
    this is a fucking awesome chapter ... can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - shinohime on July 12, 2006
    I'm addicted... please put out more for poor fanfiction users... hee hee hee...
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  • From ANON - omizu on July 04, 2006
    I really like this story more than I thought i would. I hope you continue!
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  • From Grittie on November 22, 2005
    I am thoroughly enjoying your story. It is well written and fun to read. The relationship between Harry and Draco is well done and I like the subtle way you are melding their lives. Please update soon. I haven
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  • From ANON - sbkar on November 15, 2005
    So, Draco's trip into Harry's nightmare-turned-dream resulted in a toy for both of them? Interesting.

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    more of a joke then an honor --- Since you're doing a comparison, the word is "than"; "then" is used for time.

    Slytherine --- it's Slytherin

    Pomphrey --- it's Mme. Pomfrey (www.hp-lexicon.org)

    Need a bit more punctuation work; there are sentences that need commas to make them clearer.
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  • From ANON - Saske\'s Iris on November 14, 2005
    ooohh bad boy draco getting answers out of harry when he couldn't really defend himself at least he didn't point blank say what he was...hummm i wonder when those two will start to actually notice they kinda like each other...looking forward to it. Squeals so glad u updated and as always i enjoyed it looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - KuramaIsFine on November 14, 2005
    This is rather interesting. I want to get to the DxH, but you unlike so many others actually have a plot! I praise you for that alone.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on November 13, 2005
    They pulled the toys from the dream? How? Oh I can't wait for chapter 16!
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  • From ANON - Cat on October 20, 2005
    OHHH WOW! this is good! really really good! please update soons! U just have to!!
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  • From ANON - Saske\'s Iris on October 20, 2005
    Do you know how much i want a review? really i need one like so much this story is too good to be true and I must know what happened to the other kindly ones is william lovettes one cuz he got skills. OH my gosh I love your sense of humor too, witty combacks of potter and malphoy are marvalous!!!!!!! Which is why i can't wait for an update!! So that someone can explain that noise that potter keeps hearing... is it like a danger signal or the thingy under hogwarts...hummmm. I love mythology! I love your new creatures and i would love and update!
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  • From ANON - Saske\'s iris on October 17, 2005
    yeah ur back ur back ur back!!!! I am sooooo excited to see an new chapter and it was sooooooo good squeals of delight!!!!!!!! I hope you get to update soon cuz i just can't wait for another chapter aught to be funny watching draco and harry recover together in the infermery (hehe) i love the little comments you put back and forth betweent the two its just too funny! anyway looking forward to more!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - plotbunnybrat on October 17, 2005
    I'm glad to see that you are back. I love Harry's whip skills. Please write more soon.
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  • From ANON - Erica on October 17, 2005
    Just reading your story and it seems very good. I thought I'd just bring your attention to some things though, for example:
    1. Mr Filch's first name is Argos, and
    2. Voldemort's snake is called Nagini.

    I am only about half way through what you have up at the moment so if by the end of it you have fixedit up then feel free to ignore me.
    Right that's me done. TTFN!
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