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Reviews for captured by a traitor?

By : botonchan
  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2005
    write more?
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  • From ANON - Kat Potter on June 22, 2005
    I like it very much. :D Very interesting.

    Is this going to be a dark fic or? is SEv really evil or is he just pretending?

    A very curious Kat Potter

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  • From ANON - Hambares on June 15, 2005
    Interesting start. I look forward to reading where you take this!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on June 15, 2005
    Very nice start. I like the angle you're trying to portray.

    Yes, you need a Beta, sorry to say. I would be willing to re-read your work if you can't find anyone else, as I've never Beta'd before. You can reach me at the above e-mail.

    What kind of poison did Severus give to Remus? You could explain it's effects for more angst to the story. Just a suggestion, not a flame.

    Please post soon, I can't wait.
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on June 14, 2005
    OH OH OH.... update this one now..... i've got to find out the plans...... *giggle* got to love bad snape... :)
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