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Reviews for The Ritual

By : Lacebounded
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2005
    Wanna go out Cutie, my name is Joe Pacheco. Sounds cool right I'm 30.
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  • From ANON - Kate on June 30, 2005
    A little confussed and still guessing on the plot, but over all I think its turning out nicely. A lil' confussed on the Harry and Hermione relationship, but I like it. lol! Keep it coming, I'll be watching fo it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 18, 2005
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  • From ANON - Elmo on June 17, 2005
    god i am loving this angsty story! i mean...who could hate it! god plz update!
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  • From ANON - Andrew on June 17, 2005
    Hehe, I never expected you to actually go back and make revisions, but I must admit, I do like the change. I believe, (and keep in mind, these are only my opinions, I can be 100% wrong for all I know,) you depicted Draco a lot better in telling off Pansy, because of my view that no matter how wrong or biased Draco's views are/were, he never had a problem expressing them. I'm glad you made the change, it really fits the story better in my opinion. I really look foward to your updates :) And I hope I wasn't too harsh on you, I didn't mean to make you feel obligated to change your story, being that it's your story, not mine. But I do like the alterations! Good Job :)
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  • From ANON - rani on June 17, 2005
    nooooo make it a happy ending. anyway, it was a good story.
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  • From ANON - guin on June 17, 2005
    that is great, i like the second ending better, have to go to dinner though, i'll help you out if you need it, with love guin
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  • From ANON - Andrew on June 17, 2005
    That fic was incredibly stupid... if a Malfoy always gets what he wants, he wouldn't be a coward about it. That was out of character for Draco, especially out of character for him to not speak up, being that he's one of the most out-spoken characters in the book. Now I'm not saying happy endings are necessary, but to make the characters act differently so you can have the story you want is poor writing. All in all it was a mediocre story. Just try to keep it in character next time.
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  • From ANON - jane on June 16, 2005
    The way you start off with these two chapter i think this is going to be a great story. I hope you will update soon.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on June 15, 2005
    Two sides to the coin. When something incredible comes, you don't let it pass you by. Eventually though, something WILL make it fall apart. Is it worth it?
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  • From on June 15, 2005
    Hey Becca! I think you did a great job on these two chapters. I really hope you add more to them because they could easily become addicting! Good job girl!
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