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By : harriet

From ANON - d on June 25, 2005
weird i hope u update your story as much as you updated were others fear to tread. poor harry magin doing that to him . so he wants to give him to voldie bloody sick shit its obvious he will get away he always does !! hope everything is fine after all is done.
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From ANON - eve/roarke on June 25, 2005
Three whole chapters. Riffraff your so kind to your readers. Brilliant as always.
I hope Severus cuts off Julius's Balls and makes him eat them, before killing him.
Hang on Harry, lovely Severus is coming.

Greedy but update soon Please. Best wishes, love your writing.
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From ANON - Amaya on June 24, 2005
I can't say I overly like a ruthless and emotionally barron Snape. I guess he kind of scares me. ^_^! However I do believe it is in his character to be so, therefore it does add a more realistic appeal to him. Besides it is interesting seeing him that way, and the guy did sort of deserve it. I mean with his potion all those young boys have suffered and some gone mad. Plus there is no telling what other horrible fates of innocents he has had a hand in. I guess it just proves how much Snape cares about Harry in the end, even if it was a little disturbing. ^_^! Though when I think of a helpless Harry and a ruthless, emotionally barron Snape I kind of feel sorry for Harry. @_@!

O.K. I seriously hate Julius now. ~_~ *makes voodoo doll of him, stuffs it in a microwave, and turns it on* Waaaaaaaaa!!!! The whole harem thing really surprised me. I figured he wanted Harry as some kind of sex slave but I never imagined the guy had a harem of young boys. Harems are a big turn on for me. I guess because I like imagining orgies and pretty outfits. ^_^! Though I guess in all honesty a harem really is built on the selfish sexual desires of one person (for the most part). I really hate how he lets some of them suffer and go insane that way. But how in the world could he keep them around if they do? Would they not be all over him trying to touch him or try to kill themselves? I will admit other than that they have it pretty alright with time to themselves. Poor Harry though. That jerk being so rough on him and using no lubricant. I hope Snape makes him suffer sooo badly for his lack of concern for those he forces into his bed, but I know it will be mostly for Harry. The piercing scarred me at first. I was like noooooooo but at least it was numb so he could not feel it. I just hated when Julius ignored them after he had his release and fun. I really liked that part you added in there about Harry getting sucked off by Fred. I don't know why I just liked it. ^_^! Also thanks for clearing some things up about Julius' attempted murders of Snape. I knew you would explain all. I just hope Julius does not have more time to rape Harry. I also hope that the other boys get a little bit of a happy ending after all this.

Glad to see Snape being nice to Draco again. Also glad to see him mean to Albus. Serves him right for not listening to Snape. I get what you said about the angry sex. Thank you for explaining it but I do have some more questions. Doesn't that mean it will be very bad for Harry when Snape ends up with him? Plus if he was angry then why could he not have waited to have sex with Draco or taking a calming potion? To make him bleed that way plus choke and hit him seems really mean unless there is more reason behind it. If there is sorry for bothering you with it. ^_^! I can be very over active with question asking. You did say it would make more sense later so I am sure it will. YAY!!! Hopefully Draco will get good sex this time.

I am so hyper and excited!!! *bounces* I can't wait to see what happens now!!! I just hope Julius suffers. After all look what Snape did to that other man and he did not really make Snape angry.

Oh yeah I was also wondering about the potion. If it makes the boys connected with Julius have to stay within a certain distance to him how could he leave them to go teach?

Please update soon!!!!

Awwwwwww!!! We love you too!!! *hugs* =^_^=
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From ANON - miststalker on June 24, 2005
poor Harry, poor Severus and not only that you left us hanging! I have to say more!!!! I love your writing, it's some of the best on the web for fanfic, and in some cases is even better then a profesional writers.
And can I say I want Paris? please?

As always all redheaded bishies belong to me I merely loan them out.
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From ANON - eve/roarke on June 24, 2005
Just perfect. Brilliant. I just think this story is coming amazing.
I knew the first time you posted, it's just got something. I also love
Nasty Snape. Hate his brother. Bastard.
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From ANON - canis_major on June 23, 2005
At the start of this story, I wasn't too sure about it, but now I think it's great!!
I can't wait to read more chapter's.
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From foxracerchick129 on June 23, 2005
lol Riffraff, I love it! The last couple of chapters were absoultley fabulous! Does Julius 'pierce' all of the boys? Or just the special ones? How come that one kid doesnt talk? any way, I cant wait until Julius goes to the Apocrathy for his potions! Ooh and when Snappey gets to the house, what will they do with all those boys?

Loved it! Cant wait for more! Lots of chocolate frogs and fizzzing whizbies to hold you over - Jess
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From ANON - Kateri on June 23, 2005
Oh those chapters were totaly wicked. I so love ruthless Snape who will not let anyone stand in the way of what he wants.
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From ANON - MyBelovedMasochist on June 23, 2005
How dare you merely call yourself, "riffraff", it is not at all befitting! Most stories make Severus and Harry out of character, with rather sterotypical storylines (or none at all) with twisted comparisions (i.e.: like a stalker to it's family), and twelve second lemons... (they must work at god like speeds, surely) Yet the horror doesn't end with the obvious grammer and spelling errors, such as typing, which they seem to adore sounding, quite akin, to a hormonially enraged teenager typing shorthand.

I really have searched pile upon pile of shit that almost, quite literally, copied the story above or below it. I believe everyone *needs* there adult fiction but these other pieces are certainly not what I've come for.

Severus ia ao beautifully raw, showing that he was/is a deatheater and that it wasn't/isn't a soft life, which other authors seem to forget readily enough. For once Harry isn't the oh so fablous boy-who-lived, conquered, and showed Severus the best time of his life within three short minutes. No, Harry is, not exactly raped, but shown just what nightmares can truly be like.

Dumbledore isn't running the show, Draco is abandoned by his house, Ron is acting the ignorant ass as usual, and Hermione appears at just the wrong time... 10/10 Excellent indeed!
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From ANON - T-chan on June 22, 2005
My dear, I have to say that you're like fine wine: you only get better with time!

I'm so glad that in the end you decided to continue with this story. Since its reappearance, I've been obssessively refreshing you author's info page just to see if there's a new chapter. ^_~

ATWWW is certainly darker (much darker) than your previous forays into the HP universe, but at the same time is also more... original, for a lack of better world. Althought I've love to pieces all your other stories, this one has a degree of intrigue and drama that he other had not. As for the original comment, I get the impression that you're finally comfortable enought with the fandom to start proving alternate plots and OC.

Your Severus is wonderful in this fic. Dertainly not a nice man, perhaps not even a very good one, but he still has his own very particualr set of morals and my favorite is this: Touch MY Harry, and die! :-)

Julius is the hideous and vile, in other words, the perfect villian, and the entire subplot about bounty hunters and their harems is awsome. Never in a million years would Iv'e imagined such a development. Wow.

Although the non-con aspect gives me the creeps and makes something in my chest tighten in a knot, I liked how you handled it. A numb Harry seems to me very believable (specially if we consider he's nder the effects of a potion). In fact it's even more an accurate and shocking description of the level of trauma he's undergoing than if he had simply screamed like mad (the final scene --Harry finally starting to cry-- was the cherry on top of this whole scene).

I'll (not so) patiently wait for the next update to see how things resolve themselves. There's so much mystery and uncertainty at this point!

Thanks for sharing (again)!
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From ANON - antipyro on June 20, 2005
WOW, where have I been? Two chapters to cherish and salivate over. Too Much!

And what chapters they were. The mesmerizing of Snape's thoughts as he slowly choked out Draco - absolutely powerful! The drain Harry feels in complying with Julius' requests/orders and the skill Harry shows in leaving a message for Severus - ahhhh, true love! All of this expertly written and greatly appreciated.

No, you don't have to get out more, just keep writing, I'll let you know if anything happens....ummmm, nope, nothing yet.

Thanks.
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From ANON - canis_major on June 20, 2005
Fantastic!!! You have to add more chapter's. It's getting great
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From ANON - Amaya on June 19, 2005
Waaaaaahhhhh!!! *comforts Draco* I figured the whole mentor thing was going to deal with sex but not like this. @_@ I guess the roughness is required seeing as what it is training for. Still it seems to me that Snape was primarily doing it to show Draco what a bad decision he was making about his life. Could Snape have not just simply talked to Draco about all this first and only used that sort of cruelty as a last resort. Just when things get a little better for poor Draco they crash back down in his face again. I am a little confused about this line though. "This was exactly why he didn
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From ANON - Sparkleh on June 19, 2005
Well. Pleases me that in this ficcie Draco isn't EXACTLY the manwhore he was in the Where Others Fear To Tread. XD It's a bit difficult to be on a Draco-the-Manwhore hating rampage when your favorite pairing is HPDM... Update soon?
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From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2005
Well, all I can say is...

MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!

Please!?!
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