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Reviews for Trust, Betrayal, and Destruction

By : Edelweiss
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on June 30, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - dryade on June 28, 2005
    wow! you've conveyed more conflict in your first 3 chapter than most fanfics do at all. how horrible to even think severus' turned again! what a change it'd make to the war. haven't read that point of view before and you convey it most convincingly.
    and vernon! you really should build a bit more on that too, to make it more realistic. like harry feeling guilty for not being sad or maybe a confrontation with petunia and dudley.
    great job so far!!!
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  • From ANON - orangeishy on June 27, 2005
    Once again, excellent! Hopefully, though, you'll refrain from going down the "harry falls into drink, has to be rescued" pattern. Nice plot :)
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  • From LadyGlewen on June 27, 2005
    Well you just gotta love Dumbledore and his meddling tactics, he can be quite Slytherin sometimes. Good for him ;) hehe. Anyhow this is really looking good, normally everyone keeps him (Snape) good and brooding over his "past sins" which of course is why he stays away from Hermione most the time, but you instead have him turn back to the "dark side" which will make it much more of a challenge to get through to him. Very nicely done indeed. I hope you continue with this story I would REALLY like to read more. I think this will be my 3rd review, my others might be under Shannon though if I didnt bother to log in anyhow that was me :) ok enough rubbish from me I need some damn sleep anyhow great job once again and I look forward to reading more of this absolutely facinating story of yours.
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  • From ANON - orangeishy on June 23, 2005
    Wow! You have a really interesting, ORIGINAL, and believable plot!!! Please keep writing :)
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  • From ANON - Shannon on June 18, 2005
    Ohhh nice chapter, very well done. I also like Devils' Lane, good name and besides some of the creepy ass potion ingredients, the "having someone dealt with" seems very inviting...erm wait no I wont go there hehe *puts on hat to cover protruding devil horns* ;) Erm anyways this is getting very very interesting, I wonder whats wrong with Snape? Or is that even him? hmmmmm. The questions are swirling about. Anywho like I said AWESOME chapter and I will check back for another update, can't wait!!!!
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  • From ANON - amsev on June 17, 2005
    VERY(!) intriguing beginning -- I can't wait to read more! If something happens and your format goes wonky in a future section, I'll read anyway! It's easy for a reader to fix, all they have to do is copy and paste into a program like Notepad (if they have a PC) and make sure it is set to wrap the sentences. Sorry you had a rough time with the formatting, but this is a very good start and I can't wait to see where this goes. Nice job!
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  • From ANON - Shannon on June 16, 2005
    Well I tried to review this yesterday but the computer decided not to cooperate with me grrr. Anyhow you have a great start here, this story is very intriguing, I really like it so far. One thing though Nocturn Alley isnt in Hogsmeade its in London in Diagon Alley, just thought that I would point that out, but I is your fic so no offence intended :) Anyhow great job I will be checking back for updates I really want to see how this progresses. Bravo!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 16, 2005
    can you please not to ~*~*~* for so long

    it makes the text really wide and it's irritating to read.


    please edit your post
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