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By : DracosBloodyKisses
  • From ANON - jkrocksmysocks on June 26, 2005
    Hi. I found this story today and its taken my 4 hours to read all 33 chapters. It is absolutely amazing. I really love this story. You are such a good writer. I personally feel you've included just enough sexual content to make the story work. The rape scene was shocking and moving to read. The entire storyline has had me completely absorbed. The pregnancy thing is cool aswell-Hermione isnt liking being 'fat' is she? Hehe. Love it! I just wana carry on reading it. Please post the next chapter asap. Well done *claps*
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  • From ANON - Cool Story on June 26, 2005
    Draco is turning into a psycho...it's kinda scaring. Anyways, if I were writing this fanfiction here's what I would have happen: The baby turns out to have red hair and everybody realizes it's Ron's. Draco turns into a psychopath and tries to kill Ron and Hermione but when he fails he kidnaps the baby and dyes it's hair bleach blond(poor baby)and runs away to france. Hermione becomes depressed and delusional...but then...7 years later she sees her daughter at a store in paris and tells Ron so both of them try to get their baby back and it turns into a series of events that lead up to Ron's death. Yes I know it would be like a lifetime movie but I think it would be cool :) Anyhow, back to the review...I think this story is nice. It has the right amount of drama and thr right amount of humor so good job :)
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  • From ANON - geo on June 26, 2005
    I love this story but Ron! omg... i want them to happy! yey! please please update soon!

    geo~
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  • From ANON - Angel Eyes on June 26, 2005
    I think that was a very good place to put this chapter and really added to the story. They needed to make up in some way and a nice bout of love making is often the best way to feel closer to the person you love when you're not doing so well at the moment. Now all they need to do is be mature enough to talk about what happened and why they did what they did and move on from it without making it into a huge deal and just realize that everyone makes a mistake sometimes, especially when stress and hormones get put together. The only problem I had with the Ron scene is that he's her rapist. But he was the most likely candidate for her to cheat on Draco with if she cheated on anyone and in reality Hermoine cheated a lot less than Draco did but who it is and the problems behind that will probably cause Draco to erupt again unless he can understand why it happened. I really hope that Hermoine can talk to Draco about how she's feeling about her self image since that's such a normal part of pregnancy that almost every woman goes through.
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  • From ANON - angel on June 26, 2005
    that was a great chapter and that is one way to make up .. well i cant wait in till the next time you update sooo please update sooon please ... well in till next till later

    angel
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  • From LadyGlewen on June 26, 2005
    As always smut is always welcome, however I am very anxious to see what happens with their little cheating episodes, whether they will fess up or find out by different means. Please update again SOON. :)
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  • From ANON - jadey on June 24, 2005
    ok, well instead of reveiwing on each chapter (which would take FOREVER!)i decided to wait. OMG WAT WERE HERMIONE AND DRACO THINKING?! AHHHHHH...O NO, I CANT WAIT FOR THE OUTCOME!!!

    This is brilliant. i love it!
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  • From ANON - jadey on June 24, 2005
    wow!!!!Draco was actually sweet!!!!how great!!!!
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  • From ANON - jadey on June 24, 2005
    hey this is G-R-E-A-T!!! i love it...finally someone who doesnt make Hermione out to be this perfect school girl!!
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  • From ANON - Nichole on June 23, 2005
    I think your stories are AMAZING!This is the first time i ever reveiwed your stories and i can't wait to find out whats going to happen.i wonder if hermione might fall in love with ron and if draco will find out about what happened between them.i hope everything works outs and draco and hermione stay together and get married.Truthfully i don't want draco to leave hermione because of ron,i think that would be sad exspecialy scince hermione is pregneat.but the thought of making people think draco might leave her is a preaty fun idea as long as in the end they get married.well keep on writting because you are really good at it and i to read other of your awesome stories.
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  • From ANON - RotFlamme on June 23, 2005
    I Love it! Please Continue
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  • From ANON - sesshomarusgirl56 on June 22, 2005
    OMG this is some hot shit ...the best her/dr fic i ever read . Oh i cant wait to see what happens i read the whole 32 chaps today and it was great and damn i wasn't expecting that ron thing to go done like it did! wow!..........i cant wait to see what happens next please update soon!
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  • From ANON - fAWN on June 22, 2005
    wow, no writing expirience prior to this story? holy jesus, thats awesome, you are an amazing writer. keep up the wonderful work
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on June 22, 2005
    Can I just say that I hated this chapter especially the R/Hr. If I wanted to read R/Hr I would ship R/Hr. Maybe you should of warned of other pairings in your AN. That way I wouldn't have the feeling of wanting to vomit right now.
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  • From LadyGlewen on June 22, 2005
    Ahhhhhhh HOLY SHIT!!!!! Oh my god. OK I just finally got to the most recent chapter, I actually read some the other day, hmm did I review??? I think I did its probaly under Shannon though since I am a lazy ass about signing in most of the time. ANyhow I really really do love this story!!!! I just absolutely flipped at the erm..new developements. I kept waiting for it to end up being a dream sequence when Ron and Hermione where erm doing their thing. I find it hard to believe that she would allow that to happen after he raped her and I just want to wring Pansy's slutty little neck and then beat the hell outta Draco. OK by now you can assume I have an issue with cheaters ;) Anywho I have enjoyed this story so far and I can't wait for the next update. I am anxious to see how they are going to make it through this, I for one would not be very forgiving so I am curious to see how this all works out. GREAT job!!!
    *~*~*~Shannon*~*~*~*
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