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By : museofmonotony
  • From ANON - the beta on September 06, 2005
    Just go to http://groups.yahoo.com/group/museofmonotonyhd Sorry for any inconvience. I put up my profile page for various reasons but yeah. Here it is. We would love it if you joined!
    Beth
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  • From ANON - a dragonbreah on September 06, 2005
    More please!

    And I couldn't get that profile link (http://www.fanfiction.net/~bandgeek2006) to work to get to your yahoogroup. :( Why isn't it in your profile here?
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  • From DemonBlaze on August 21, 2005
    the chpater was great!
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  • From ANON - Akusaa on August 21, 2005
    I just read this story, and it's great! Oooh, what WILL they say when they see the name Haryy Potter? And what about DRACO and Harry? lol, update soon please!
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  • From ANON - sak on August 21, 2005
    You may consider this cliched plotline, but it is well-written and well-plotted with lots of twists and turns. The characters in Harry's parent's time are well-drawn and realistic. I did not expect Harry's fear to be Draco and that is a monkey wrench in his Time Travel. Nor did I expect that Lupin would be peeved at the professor. I liked that you tied in things to Harry's past and present--the glimpse of the first stirrings of attraction, Draco's worry for Harry adn especially, Harry's contemplation of his expectations after the defeat of Voldemort--that his insecurities and that would disappear. I am really enjoying this and cannot wait for more.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 21, 2005
    Why is Draco Harry's greatest fear? Need chapter 5 please!
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  • From ANON - Metranome on July 21, 2005
    I'm very much intrigued by what you have so far, and I'm looking forward to more. Good Writing to you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2005
    oh man. i like this a lot. and i already read HBP so update already! geez.

    and i mean that nicely. i
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 17, 2005
    What happened? I can't wait for chapter 3!
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  • From DemonBlaze on July 16, 2005
    The chapter was good. Poor Draco...wasnt he the one who talked Harry into it in the first place?
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  • From ANON - a dragonbreath on July 15, 2005
    ohhhh...... Thank you! nice twist at the end of two... and if you do find out about other time traveling stories, please tell us.

    I like the possibility of Snape and Harry's student-teacher relationship being switched. Should be an interesting way to find out Snape's motivations.

    I wonder if it's Snape that causes Harry not to return to the future... or the mauraders (sp?)

    Nice work and keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - acr on July 15, 2005
    Interesting.
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  • From DemonBlaze on July 15, 2005
    The chapter was wonderful. I think the chapters lengths are fine as is.
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  • From ANON - Jade on July 14, 2005
    oooo, I like it! Do you know how long the story is gonna be? I promise I'll follow the whole way! >_
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 14, 2005
    So what happens in chapter 1?
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